if you want to read the first part it's in this forum under "bear with me rewrote Santuro again." Thanks haven't the patience to rewrite it again
that would make it three...way too much...
ok rest of Chapter 1
Santuro awoke with the suns rays bearing into his eyes. He groaned awake, momentarily forgetting where he was. It came back to him in full force like a tidal wave.
He fought off the nausea."what's done is done," he said aloud hoping to shake away his demons. He opened up the barn doors. Was this really the same barn? he wondered noticing how much it was decaying.
Stepping out into the sun, he breathed in the fresh air like a prisoner who had not seen the light of day for years. Feeling better then his previous night, he decided to head out to his dojo. Taturo will be worried, Santuro thought and quickened his pace.
He hummed catches of songs and llullabies, anything to keep his mind occupied. He almost fooled himself that it was a dream, his attire reminded him otherwise. He reached his destination within half a day, a little village about 2 or 3 miles from the slained Christian village. Upwind, the smell of decaying flesh hung in the air.
"santuro! Santuro!" He turned and his face brightened. Running down the road just before the entrance to the village was none other then his best friend, Koga. Walking and gasping for air, Koga recounted how everyone in the village was worried that he had been killed. And when the body hadn't been found, they grew worried that government officials had arrested him."Taturo is worried," Koga added, finally catching his breathe.
Noticing his outfit, "Hey! Are you hurt? Bleeding." Koga started checking over his body. Santuro shoved him away, shaking his head, "Not my blood. By the way, where is Satsume?" "Injured, like the rest." Koga said softly. "Injured?" Santuro stopped. Koga shook his head, "Those Christians had called an incantation or spell on them. They haven't been able to see since the battle."
"Does Maigen know?" Santuro resumed walking towards their house. "Leader? He knows and he's not to happy about it either. He's ready to attack every Christian village out there." Koga smiled. "Good. Hopefully we will all get our wish." Santuro smiled. As they approached the dojo, sentries began to announce that the lost samurai had been found and returned unharmed. Someday, Santuro thought as he was whisked inside to meet Maigen, someday we shall decimate all of them until like rats they flee away from Japan forever.
I see a definite improvement and it's such a great story idea. I would only mention this, always remember to stay in the right tense when you write. I still make this mistake - it's very common and I see it a lot in young and old writers alilke. Your sentence structure flows much better. Keep going and I look forward to seeing the rest. 
BUT THANKYOU! Take criticism as well...