um.. manga story

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um.. manga story

Postby shamanking343 » Thu Oct 16, 2003 12:29 pm

I dont know if this is the right place but i have a good idea for a manga story



Its set in WW1 and there is this ace flyer (on britions side) named rintaf thats very niave and he thinks hes the best. well he meets up with the red baron and gets blasted out of the sky like in five secounds from when the battle starts. And while he plumets to the ground he losses consiousness and blacks out. Later he is found by a farmer and he brings rintaf to his house. rintaf regains consouious and the whole were am I story starts ect. When he falls asleep somthing werid happens. He gets abducted by aliens. :thumb: He gets chosen by them to be there new squadren leader for the galactic police to face the neta overlord.



well thats all I gots right now plese make sugggestions :P
I AM THE WAY INTO THE DOLEFUL CITY
I AM THE WAY INTO ETERNAL GRIEF,
I AM THE WAY TO A FORSAKEN RACE.
JUSTICE IT WAS THAT MOVED MY GREAT CREATOR;
DIVINE OMNIPOTENCE CREATED ME,
AND HIGHEST WISDOM JOINED WITH PRIMAL LOVE.
BEFORE ME NOTHING BUT ETERNAL THINGS
WERE MADE, AND I SHALL LAST ETERNALLY
ABANDON ALL HOPE, ALL YOU WHO ENTER

my website ^(^ :rock:
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Postby Razgriz » Thu Oct 16, 2003 12:31 pm

Sounds interesting, has very good potential.
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Postby shamanking343 » Thu Oct 16, 2003 12:33 pm

yeh I just need someone to draw it ( I try to draw manga but I suck :lol: )
I AM THE WAY INTO THE DOLEFUL CITY
I AM THE WAY INTO ETERNAL GRIEF,
I AM THE WAY TO A FORSAKEN RACE.
JUSTICE IT WAS THAT MOVED MY GREAT CREATOR;
DIVINE OMNIPOTENCE CREATED ME,
AND HIGHEST WISDOM JOINED WITH PRIMAL LOVE.
BEFORE ME NOTHING BUT ETERNAL THINGS
WERE MADE, AND I SHALL LAST ETERNALLY
ABANDON ALL HOPE, ALL YOU WHO ENTER

my website ^(^ :rock:
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Postby Razgriz » Thu Oct 16, 2003 12:34 pm

Maybe you should write it in story form first and post it here, it's a very unique idea.
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Postby Mimichan » Thu Oct 16, 2003 12:34 pm

cool..I think it'd make a good story^_^
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"Why do people not notice until they lose it?
What it is that's truly important...
Although I can't afford to forgive even myself,
Because you were there,
I was able to be myself (Natural).
I want to be honest...I want to be kind...
I want to be the adult I once (in my childhood) longed to be.
I go on fighting against the heart to run away...
I go on fighting against that invisible something!"
---

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Postby shamanking343 » Thu Oct 16, 2003 12:37 pm

like a script/play?
I AM THE WAY INTO THE DOLEFUL CITY
I AM THE WAY INTO ETERNAL GRIEF,
I AM THE WAY TO A FORSAKEN RACE.
JUSTICE IT WAS THAT MOVED MY GREAT CREATOR;
DIVINE OMNIPOTENCE CREATED ME,
AND HIGHEST WISDOM JOINED WITH PRIMAL LOVE.
BEFORE ME NOTHING BUT ETERNAL THINGS
WERE MADE, AND I SHALL LAST ETERNALLY
ABANDON ALL HOPE, ALL YOU WHO ENTER

my website ^(^ :rock:
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Postby Razgriz » Thu Oct 16, 2003 12:37 pm

sure, that'd be the easiest to transfer into manga form.
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Postby shamanking343 » Thu Oct 16, 2003 12:39 pm

sounds good to me Ill just type on word then paste to here :thumb:
I AM THE WAY INTO THE DOLEFUL CITY
I AM THE WAY INTO ETERNAL GRIEF,
I AM THE WAY TO A FORSAKEN RACE.
JUSTICE IT WAS THAT MOVED MY GREAT CREATOR;
DIVINE OMNIPOTENCE CREATED ME,
AND HIGHEST WISDOM JOINED WITH PRIMAL LOVE.
BEFORE ME NOTHING BUT ETERNAL THINGS
WERE MADE, AND I SHALL LAST ETERNALLY
ABANDON ALL HOPE, ALL YOU WHO ENTER

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Postby true_noir_chloe » Thu Oct 16, 2003 7:00 pm

It sounds interesting. :thumb: I wrote a manga in a basic script format and my artist found that easiest to read. Hope you the best. :)

Tokyopop's website also has a format that you can use with mangas if you'd like to look that up.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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