psp 8 pics/and chibi's new style and pics
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Awwwwwww, Mina is so cute. I like the expression you gave her. ^______^ Great job, as always! *SUPER BIG HUG*
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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O.O Ahh.....Its Blue!!! I like it alot!! I mostly like the hair!!
The Picture is Very Kawaii!!:thumb:
The Picture is Very Kawaii!!:thumb:
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HikariChan - Posts: 1126
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- Location: -Where I practice flying with my Imagination-Big Ol' Texas-
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ShiroiHikari - Posts: 7564
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- Location: Somewhere between 1983 and 1989
Thankies everyone X3 Such nice comment *gives everyone a big glomp*
happy go luck monkey!
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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chibi_chan - Posts: 633
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Oh! Chibi....Mina is so BERY cute!!!!! XD <3 Can't wait to see more of her pictures!! Draw more you!! ^^
[SIZE="6"][color="Pink"]♥ [font="Impact"]t-chan[/font]![/color][/SIZE]
[font="Impact"][SIZE="3"][color="Pink"]Everyday, it's You i live for!
Everyday, i'll follow after You!
Everyday, i'll walk with You, my Lord![/color][/SIZE][/font]
[font="Impact"][SIZE="3"][color="Pink"]Everyday, it's You i live for!
Everyday, i'll follow after You!
Everyday, i'll walk with You, my Lord![/color][/SIZE][/font]
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Little T-chan - Posts: 518
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- Location: USA
very nice! I like the expression, and general attitude. Just a question, how big (inches, pixels, whatever) is the original?
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mechana2015 - Posts: 5025
- Joined: Wed Oct 22, 2003 12:33 am
- Location: Orange County
<<Oh! Chibi....Mina is so BERY cute!!!!! XD <3 Can't wait to see more of her pictures!! Draw more you!! ^^>>
Thankies
*gives Little T_chan a hug*
<<very nice! I like the expression, and general attitude. Just a question, how big (inches, pixels, whatever) is the original?>>
Thanks, but what do you mean how big is the origanal? *ish confused O_o*
Thankies
*gives Little T_chan a hug*
<<very nice! I like the expression, and general attitude. Just a question, how big (inches, pixels, whatever) is the original?>>
Thanks, but what do you mean how big is the origanal? *ish confused O_o*
happy go luck monkey!
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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chibi_chan - Posts: 633
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- Location: at home
chibi_chan wrote:<<very nice! I like the expression, and general attitude. Just a question, how big (inches, pixels, whatever) is the original?>>
Thanks, but what do you mean how big is the origanal? *ish confused O_o*
What are the dimensions of the drawing (for example 1024x768 pixels, 8.5x11 inches, etc.) if its a computer creatied picture it'd be pixels, if it's on paper, what's its size in inches?.
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mechana2015 - Posts: 5025
- Joined: Wed Oct 22, 2003 12:33 am
- Location: Orange County
Ahh, I thought you placed the pic from the gallery over here. Ah well. T_T
Place more pictures in here, kay? XDXD
Place more pictures in here, kay? XDXD
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
- Joined: Wed Sep 10, 2003 12:00 pm
- Location: Where Tex-Mex is the best! ^_____^
<<What are the dimensions of the drawing (for example 1024x768 pixels, 8.5x11 inches, etc.) if its a computer creatied picture it'd be pixels, if it's on paper, what's its size in inches?.>>
I don't know, it was done on paper in a sketchbook I have but I don't know the size, sorry.
<<Ahh, I thought you placed the pic from the gallery over here. Ah well. T_T
Place more pictures in here, kay? XDXD>>
LOL, maybe...*evil grin*
I don't know, it was done on paper in a sketchbook I have but I don't know the size, sorry.
<<Ahh, I thought you placed the pic from the gallery over here. Ah well. T_T
Place more pictures in here, kay? XDXD>>
LOL, maybe...*evil grin*
happy go luck monkey!
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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chibi_chan - Posts: 633
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- Location: at home
I'm back! With more pics! (sorry only one)
Featuring a new chara Midori!!! She's a healer at 15 and a pretty good one at that.^^The reason why she's wearing those type of clothes is becuase it's set in the future and the world is a wastland and is at constant war, so everyone wears those type of clothes. I'll post her close up soon, wich shows her with her hair down. Constutcive critiscm is welcome, please *looks up with puppy eyes*
(sorry only one)
Featuring a new chara Midori!!! She's a healer at 15 and a pretty good one at that.^^The reason why she's wearing those type of clothes is becuase it's set in the future and the world is a wastland and is at constant war, so everyone wears those type of clothes. I'll post her close up soon, wich shows her with her hair down. Constutcive critiscm is welcome, please *looks up with puppy eyes*
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happy go luck monkey!
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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chibi_chan - Posts: 633
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- Location: at home
OOOooooooo, I love your Midori pic! 
I'm glad you colored it. I think its very creative the way you designed her outfit. I especially like how you did her hair with those little ties around it.
This is a super great picture, but you know I've told you that before. I'm so glad you colored it and put it up here.
Fantastic art, sweetheart! 
I'm glad you colored it. I think its very creative the way you designed her outfit. I especially like how you did her hair with those little ties around it. This is a super great picture, but you know I've told you that before. I'm so glad you colored it and put it up here.
Fantastic art, sweetheart! [size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
- Joined: Wed Sep 10, 2003 12:00 pm
- Location: Where Tex-Mex is the best! ^_____^
Thank you^^Here's some more pics featuring some new chara's^^There mostly for reference so there not the best. please comment.^^
1. My new chara Hikari^^I didn't do anything to the lighting (like the pic in the gallery) so you can see her actual hair color.^^She's very quit and doesn't talk much and cna be somewhat of a crybaby, she gets scared pretty easily and even though she's a vampire she doesn't like to drink blood and instead tries to shut her self out from the world so she doesn't have much freinds. I put her in her school uniform here so please tell me what you think and contructive critiscm is welcome.^^
2. Here's another new chara from the same seires as Hikari and is her love interest. He's also a vampire and is a whole lot stronger then Hikari. Unlike Hikari though, he's used to blood and tries to get Hikari to except her fate. He has an older sister who i'll put on here as soon as I draw a pic of her. And his names Amaya (sounds kinda like a girls name^^;; ) Please tell me what you think and constructive critiscm is welcome.^^
3. And here's Hikari's only freind Hitomi! She's human but comes from a family of phsycics so she can tell wether a person is human or not just by looking at them. She's very gentle and loves classical music, she practices both the violin and piano everyday. I know the skirt looks really short here but it's actually longer, the jacket mostly covers it up though. She knows Hikari's a vampire but doesn't fear her one bit. Sorry, I don't have anything more to say about her so thats it please tell me what you think and constrructive critiscm is welcome.^^
1. My new chara Hikari^^I didn't do anything to the lighting (like the pic in the gallery) so you can see her actual hair color.^^She's very quit and doesn't talk much and cna be somewhat of a crybaby, she gets scared pretty easily and even though she's a vampire she doesn't like to drink blood and instead tries to shut her self out from the world so she doesn't have much freinds. I put her in her school uniform here so please tell me what you think and contructive critiscm is welcome.^^
2. Here's another new chara from the same seires as Hikari and is her love interest. He's also a vampire and is a whole lot stronger then Hikari. Unlike Hikari though, he's used to blood and tries to get Hikari to except her fate. He has an older sister who i'll put on here as soon as I draw a pic of her. And his names Amaya (sounds kinda like a girls name^^;; ) Please tell me what you think and constructive critiscm is welcome.^^
3. And here's Hikari's only freind Hitomi!
She's human but comes from a family of phsycics so she can tell wether a person is human or not just by looking at them. She's very gentle and loves classical music, she practices both the violin and piano everyday. I know the skirt looks really short here but it's actually longer, the jacket mostly covers it up though. She knows Hikari's a vampire but doesn't fear her one bit. Sorry, I don't have anything more to say about her so thats it please tell me what you think and constrructive critiscm is welcome.^^You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
happy go luck monkey!
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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chibi_chan - Posts: 633
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- Location: at home
kawaii! I love your characters, and Hikari and Hitomi are adorable X3
[color="DimGray"]I don't believe that I would die if I saw you face to face;
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.
- Danya[/color]
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.
- Danya[/color]
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Danyasaur - Posts: 875
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- Location: On the road where potholes come to die.
They all look so good. ^___^ I'm with Archy in saying I love your characters. They're so cute! *hugs*
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
- Joined: Wed Sep 10, 2003 12:00 pm
- Location: Where Tex-Mex is the best! ^_____^
Very nice! I really like the cell shading that you're doing on these charachters. The vampires look very nice and the story sounds interesting...good job!
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mechana2015 - Posts: 5025
- Joined: Wed Oct 22, 2003 12:33 am
- Location: Orange County
Thank you, everyone! X3
happy go luck monkey!
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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chibi_chan - Posts: 633
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- Location: at home
Oh my goodness, too many updates at the art section. @_@
ok, constructive criticism huh? XD Here we go.
1) Hikari: I like the colors. You're doing very well, coming up with very good color combinations. May I ask if she is wearing some black tights under her skirt (something like Utena?) The outline for this pic is a bit jagged (not very smooth). I'm wondering whether it's just how you've been inking it or whether it's a scanning/resolution issue. Also, I think you need to practice a bit more on the folds of the socks since they look kinda ballooned up to me. But don't sweat, learning to do clothing folds takes a lot of practice and I think you're getting better each time. ^_^
2) Amaya: Yeah that does sound feminine teehee. But hah, it's fine. I like the pose he is in. What color is his hair actually? Is it black or red? I don't have any criticisms on this one, it's really good. I am wondering whether he have long fingernails now though? Does he? hehe
3) Hitomi: Hey, cute girl, reminds me of Tohru. As said, colors are great. Only one thing, her left ponytail seems to be a little out of alignment. Looks a bit too much on her left, judging by the direction of her face. Apart from that, very nice.
Good job, chibi-chan! Hope this helps and I apologize for not being able to check on the previous updates. I haven't been to the Art Corner that much lately...too many things to do. ^_^;;;
ok, constructive criticism huh? XD Here we go.
1) Hikari: I like the colors. You're doing very well, coming up with very good color combinations. May I ask if she is wearing some black tights under her skirt (something like Utena?) The outline for this pic is a bit jagged (not very smooth). I'm wondering whether it's just how you've been inking it or whether it's a scanning/resolution issue. Also, I think you need to practice a bit more on the folds of the socks since they look kinda ballooned up to me. But don't sweat, learning to do clothing folds takes a lot of practice and I think you're getting better each time. ^_^
2) Amaya: Yeah that does sound feminine teehee. But hah, it's fine. I like the pose he is in. What color is his hair actually? Is it black or red? I don't have any criticisms on this one, it's really good. I am wondering whether he have long fingernails now though? Does he? hehe
3) Hitomi: Hey, cute girl, reminds me of Tohru. As said, colors are great. Only one thing, her left ponytail seems to be a little out of alignment. Looks a bit too much on her left, judging by the direction of her face. Apart from that, very nice.
Good job, chibi-chan! Hope this helps and I apologize for not being able to check on the previous updates. I haven't been to the Art Corner that much lately...too many things to do. ^_^;;;
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Mave - Posts: 3662
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<<May I ask if she is wearing some black tights under her skirt (something like Utena?)>>
Yep! I saw them in an art book and thought it was a cool idea to use shorts with a school uniform and scence Hikari's modest it's perfect for her.^^
<<The outline for this pic is a bit jagged (not very smooth). I'm wondering whether it's just how you've been inking it or whether it's a scanning/resolution issue.>>
I don't know, the origenal was pretty smooth but for some reason it looks jagged, evil scanner...-.-
<<Also, I think you need to practice a bit more on the folds of the socks since they look kinda ballooned up to me. But don't sweat, learning to do clothing folds takes a lot of practice and I think you're getting better each time. ^_^>>
Thank you! I'll definatly work on that.^^
<<What color is his hair actually? Is it black or red?>>
It's red, I think next time I draw a pic of him I'll make it look more redish, LOL.
<<I am wondering whether he have long fingernails now though? Does he? hehe>>
He doesn't, but I messed up on them and so they look kinda long, hehe...;
Thank you for the constructive critiscm.^^
Yep! I saw them in an art book and thought it was a cool idea to use shorts with a school uniform and scence Hikari's modest it's perfect for her.^^
<<The outline for this pic is a bit jagged (not very smooth). I'm wondering whether it's just how you've been inking it or whether it's a scanning/resolution issue.>>
I don't know, the origenal was pretty smooth but for some reason it looks jagged, evil scanner...-.-
<<Also, I think you need to practice a bit more on the folds of the socks since they look kinda ballooned up to me. But don't sweat, learning to do clothing folds takes a lot of practice and I think you're getting better each time. ^_^>>
Thank you! I'll definatly work on that.^^
<<What color is his hair actually? Is it black or red?>>
It's red, I think next time I draw a pic of him I'll make it look more redish, LOL.
<<I am wondering whether he have long fingernails now though? Does he? hehe>>
He doesn't, but I messed up on them and so they look kinda long, hehe...;
Thank you for the constructive critiscm.^^
happy go luck monkey!
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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chibi_chan - Posts: 633
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- Location: at home
'Nother update!! Yay! XD
1. Usagi's other sister Chika. She's the oldeest of the sisters and my favorite. She's a little morbid and looks to the cards for guidence. Out of the sisters she's the most deepest and it's kinda sad if you think about it (least for me). She likes someone but She says it's unatanable love. and instead of telling him about it she doesn't cuase she's the type who'll never tell someone she lieks them even if the person's feelings are the same. The reason though I think it's sad is cause even though there perfect for each other they'll never be together because seeing as how the guy's in his 30's and she's 17 I don't think it's right, there still a cute couple though
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2. Finally drew a pic of Amaya's sister, Yukiko. Who has became my fave chara in the seireis, LOL . The reason why is because she's very easygoing but can go crazy and get voilent. (killing everything in site) Thats all I have to say about her^^;;; Please comment and constructive critiscm is welcome, please.
3. MY chara Usagi.^^I tried giving her a kid body scence she's only 14 and acts like a kid sometimes. I really like how this one came out! Please comment and constructive critiscm is welcome.^^
4. Usagi's sister Michi^^. I really like her hair, too bad I couldn't draw more iof it...;-; PLease tell me what you think and cunstructive critiscm is welcome.^^oh yeah, and she's 15.^^
5. 'nother new chara, called Sora. don't have much to say 'bout this one though so please comment and constructive critisicm is welcome.^^
1. Usagi's other sister Chika. She's the oldeest of the sisters and my favorite. She's a little morbid and looks to the cards for guidence. Out of the sisters she's the most deepest and it's kinda sad if you think about it (least for me). She likes someone but She says it's unatanable love. and instead of telling him about it she doesn't cuase she's the type who'll never tell someone she lieks them even if the person's feelings are the same. The reason though I think it's sad is cause even though there perfect for each other they'll never be together because seeing as how the guy's in his 30's and she's 17 I don't think it's right, there still a cute couple though
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2. Finally drew a pic of Amaya's sister, Yukiko. Who has became my fave chara in the seireis, LOL
. The reason why is because she's very easygoing but can go crazy and get voilent. (killing everything in site) Thats all I have to say about her^^;;; Please comment and constructive critiscm is welcome, please.
3. MY chara Usagi.^^I tried giving her a kid body scence she's only 14 and acts like a kid sometimes. I really like how this one came out!
Please comment and constructive critiscm is welcome.^^
4. Usagi's sister Michi^^. I really like her hair, too bad I couldn't draw more iof it...;-; PLease tell me what you think and cunstructive critiscm is welcome.^^oh yeah, and she's 15.^^
5. 'nother new chara, called Sora. don't have much to say 'bout this one though so please comment and constructive critisicm is welcome.^^
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happy go luck monkey!
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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chibi_chan - Posts: 633
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- Location: at home
I really like the way you drew the top middle gal, Yukiko. I think she might have been my fave. The first one reminds me of you - in looks.
My only critique would be on the feet and ankles of the girls with sandals, they seem a little fat.
Other than that, I just love them all. They are really, really awesome, fantastic and superb! 
Great job, sweetheart!
My only critique would be on the feet and ankles of the girls with sandals, they seem a little fat.
Other than that, I just love them all. They are really, really awesome, fantastic and superb!
Great job, sweetheart! [size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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- Location: Where Tex-Mex is the best! ^_____^
those are all so cute. i like the third and last ones the best. the blue hair is cool.
everywhere i go i can't escape your energy - Skillet
this isn't war, but these are still battles
and battles make it all die out - Dead Poetic
Sometimes I don't know
Where I am
Where I'll be - A Thorn For Every Heart
this isn't war, but these are still battles
and battles make it all die out - Dead Poetic
Sometimes I don't know
Where I am
Where I'll be - A Thorn For Every Heart
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Angelchick - Posts: 1585
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- Location: where the sun never dies
Oh wow! What a huge improvement from the first page to now!!!! ^______^ Your stuff looks awesome now! I like the colors and the poses.
"Sorry, I got lost on the path known as life today." ~Kakashi, (Naruto)
"In the ninja world,
those that do not follow the rules are called trash.
But you know,
those that don't take care of their friends
are worse than trash!"
~Kakashi (Naruto)
"In the ninja world,
those that do not follow the rules are called trash.
But you know,
those that don't take care of their friends
are worse than trash!"
~Kakashi (Naruto)
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Spirit Ninja - Posts: 11
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kawaii! I love Usagi and Yukiko! great job ^_^
[color="DimGray"]I don't believe that I would die if I saw you face to face;
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.
- Danya[/color]
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.
- Danya[/color]
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Danyasaur - Posts: 875
- Joined: Thu Nov 06, 2003 5:06 pm
- Location: On the road where potholes come to die.
Hah Constructive criticisms, here we come. (wow, chibi-chan, you're drawing a lot! )
1. Chika: Very nice piece, I like it. " Looks to cards for guidance", though? 0.o;;
2. Yukiko: The colors are good but I think the clothing folds are a little awkward, especially the blue top. I know it's quite challenging to draw 'loose' clothing (you're doing really well with the body-fitting clothes). I learnt how to draw such clothing by copying Nobuhiro Watsuki (Kenshin manga) because I love how the clothes fold and flow in the wind (hehe). I think Hot Gimmick does a pretty good job with the clothing as well but I do not recommend its content.
3/4. Usagi&Michi: Usagi's eyes are exceptionally good, keep that up! I also like how both the girls look and their colors. I would echo what Chloe said about the legs.
5. Sora: I like her general design. I just think that her fringe is kinda long (is it meant to block her eyes? heh) and I don't really understand how the clothing on top is supposed to look. Is it a vest?
Great job! My fav. is Usagi. XD
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1. Chika: Very nice piece, I like it. " Looks to cards for guidance", though? 0.o;;
2. Yukiko: The colors are good but I think the clothing folds are a little awkward, especially the blue top. I know it's quite challenging to draw 'loose' clothing (you're doing really well with the body-fitting clothes). I learnt how to draw such clothing by copying Nobuhiro Watsuki (Kenshin manga) because I love how the clothes fold and flow in the wind (hehe). I think Hot Gimmick does a pretty good job with the clothing as well but I do not recommend its content.
3/4. Usagi&Michi: Usagi's eyes are exceptionally good, keep that up! I also like how both the girls look and their colors. I would echo what Chloe said about the legs.
5. Sora: I like her general design. I just think that her fringe is kinda long (is it meant to block her eyes? heh) and I don't really understand how the clothing on top is supposed to look. Is it a vest?
Great job! My fav. is Usagi. XD
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<<1. Chika: Very nice piece, I like it. " Looks to cards for guidance", though? 0.o;;>>
It's nothing satanic if thats what your thinkin' O_o;. Think of Risa on D.N. Angel or Chigage on Sister Princess.^^
<<3/4. Usagi&Michi: Usagi's eyes are exceptionally good, keep that up! I also like how both the girls look and their colors. I would echo what Chloe said about the legs.>>
Thank you.^^I tried adding detail but got frustrated and ended up doing a bad job, heh^^;;.
<<5. Sora: I like her general design. I just think that her fringe is kinda long (is it meant to block her eyes? heh)>>
Whats a fringe O_o?
<<and I don't really understand how the clothing on top is supposed to look. Is it a vest?>>
Something like that I geuss....
It's nothing satanic if thats what your thinkin' O_o;. Think of Risa on D.N. Angel or Chigage on Sister Princess.^^
<<3/4. Usagi&Michi: Usagi's eyes are exceptionally good, keep that up! I also like how both the girls look and their colors. I would echo what Chloe said about the legs.>>
Thank you.^^I tried adding detail but got frustrated and ended up doing a bad job, heh^^;;.
<<5. Sora: I like her general design. I just think that her fringe is kinda long (is it meant to block her eyes? heh)>>
Whats a fringe O_o?
<<and I don't really understand how the clothing on top is supposed to look. Is it a vest?>>
Something like that I geuss....
happy go luck monkey!
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita
hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo
maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru
boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo
yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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