First chapter of my story Shrinking Violet
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First chapter of my story Shrinking Violet
Here is the first chapter of my story Shrinking Violet. Its attached to this message. Hope you like it!
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- Alexandra-chan
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I like what little I've read. You have a great name for your protagonist - Chloe. ^_^ LOL I, however, can not read the way you have placed it here. My eyes just aren't good enough. Would you please try to post it on the thread directly? I'd really like to read the rest. ~-^
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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The story is off to a good start ^_^ Keep writing! I'd like to see what happens to Chloe.
"Why do people not notice until they lose it?
What it is that's truly important...
Although I can't afford to forgive even myself,
Because you were there,
I was able to be myself (Natural).
I want to be honest...I want to be kind...
I want to be the adult I once (in my childhood) longed to be.
I go on fighting against the heart to run away...
I go on fighting against that invisible something!"---
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Mimichan - Posts: 241
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Iesu_no_Senshi: I'm glad you liked it!
true_noir_chloe : I have the story at fictionpress.net. The url is http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1464418
Hope you'll be able to read it. I tried to put in on the thread awhile ago but it was to big so you'll have to give me yur email address if the letters aren't big enough.
Ja ne!
God bless!
true_noir_chloe : I have the story at fictionpress.net. The url is http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1464418
Hope you'll be able to read it. I tried to put in on the thread awhile ago but it was to big so you'll have to give me yur email address if the letters aren't big enough.
Ja ne!
God bless!
- Alexandra-chan
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- Joined: Thu Oct 09, 2003 3:43 pm
- Location: USA
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