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Postby Lufkin777 » Wed Nov 12, 2003 8:37 pm

Hey this is my frist thread in the Art Corner! lol eh, My "art" is verrrrrrrrry beginner. But anyway, I almost feel uncomfertable posting it. BUT what I will post is stuff I am sending to my bro and sis back home! bc I love them so much! Anyway ok here ya go, these were scaned really big.
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Postby Shinja » Wed Nov 12, 2003 8:41 pm

i like them theyre very ponderous, and sirene
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Postby inkhana » Wed Nov 12, 2003 8:59 pm

Don't be nervous! ^^ We all had to start somewhere. I like the last one the best, very nice...:thumb:


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Postby Razgriz » Wed Nov 12, 2003 9:44 pm

Great job. :thumb:
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Postby EireWolf » Wed Nov 12, 2003 10:37 pm

I really like the mood of the last one; it reminds me of me. :) The 2nd one seems to have a similar feel to it, too.... like standing in awe of the universe and the One who made it, in the clear moonlit midnight...
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Postby Gypsy » Thu Nov 13, 2003 3:14 pm

Hey, nice job! I'd like to see some more of your stuff.

Just a general art tip:

I used to draw on lined paper a lot. That stuff smudges like crazy, especially with very detailed work like you've got there. I didn't notice any, but I imagine that you're either really careful not to drag your hand through it, you cleaned it up really good, or ... you already use my tip. Take a scrap of tinfoil (*ahem* or aluminum foil for picky people) or waxed paper and keep it under the blade your hand at all times. That keeps you from scrubbing back over your work.
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Thu Nov 13, 2003 3:19 pm

Those look really nice for being a beginner. :wow!: My son used to draw on lined paper all the time, too. I love the one in the middle; it makes me want to go jump on the big bunny from behind. :) The third one however, is my favorite. It places the onlooker (me) into such a calm and thoughtful feeling.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


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Postby Bunny » Thu Nov 13, 2003 3:25 pm

EEE! It's a bunny, I love it!! Hehe! I feel the same as everyone else about these, be careful with the lined paper (it can be hateful) and something I found really helps me (I'm a beginner too) is drawing big. If you can get your hands on a big sheet of paper or a small poster or something, those are great to start with. Sometimes having more textured paper is good too so your pencil doesn't slip around and all.
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Postby Mithrandir » Thu Nov 13, 2003 3:47 pm

[quote="EireWolf"]I really like the mood of the last one]

:whoa: It really does! That's cool!

I like that style. (And not just 'cause it reminds me of the wolf...)
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Postby Lufkin777 » Sun Nov 16, 2003 10:09 am

anonymous wrote:i refuse to critique untill you draw front views larger. :grin: but the extra space does make the picture seem more dramatic...



what do you mean?
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Postby Lufkin777 » Tue Nov 18, 2003 5:59 pm

anonymous wrote:ahre? what you mean by "what do you mean?"

i cant really analyze stuf that is too small for me to see the details
the extra space seems to give the pictures a sort of thoughtful/dreaming/empty mood


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OH you wanted them scaned bigger.. Sorry i wasent getting it lol. I cant really post them any bigger they take up to much space. Sorry .
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