poem of Wolfwood at his death

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poem of Wolfwood at his death

Postby churchgirl111 » Mon Nov 10, 2003 6:44 pm

Don't worry this won't be too sad...more reflection

The Final Bullet

I have carried this cross for a long time now
Did i ever truly believe in you?
Now death has come to claim me
Will you forgive me?

My life source of this temporary body flows free
and here i am repenting
at death realizing what it is
what it means to truly carry the cross

My life passes before me
Milly how i will miss you
i'm sorry for leaving
Forgive me
Please remember not what i have done
Remember please my words
the words of Life even if i did not chose until now

Death come and take me
i am forgiven and i give myself to him
For with death's final bullet i was made free
Milly i shall see you soon
I'll be waiting
I'll be waiting with a warm embrace
[quote] If not now then when? If not me then who?- anonymous

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This is His testimony: God has given us eternal life and this life is in His Son, He who has the Son of God has Life. He who does not have the Son of God does not have Life.-John

Why am i crying in French??- Vash the Stampede
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Mon Nov 10, 2003 8:45 pm

I don't really know poetry or remember Trigun, but I liked your poem. :)

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Dirge » Mon Nov 10, 2003 9:09 pm

T.T I love wolfwood! this poem so suits him
::sobs uncontrollably::
the worst part when he died, his final words were "I didnt want to die this way"
::hugs a little homemade doll of wolfwood, suddenly stops sobbing, and continues everyday life::
twas a good poem :D
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Where do you go when you just dont know, and how do we relight the flame when it's cold?
Why do we dream when our thoughts mean nothing, and when will we learn to control?
I need serenity, In a place where I can't hide. I need serenity, Nothing changes days go by.
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Postby churchgirl111 » Tue Nov 11, 2003 7:14 pm

haha...i agree...i was tearing up on that part..specially when he was seeking forgiveness...SOBS* Okay i'm okay....Thanks for the feedback :) I appreciate all the feedback i can get
[quote] If not now then when? If not me then who?- anonymous

:thumb: LOVE AND PEACE!!!- Vash the Stampede

This is His testimony: God has given us eternal life and this life is in His Son, He who has the Son of God has Life. He who does not have the Son of God does not have Life.-John

Why am i crying in French??- Vash the Stampede
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