the game factor second try!

[diton 13]

umm hi i treid to post so this is my way of seeing if i did anything wrong. oh and its a new storyline...

......outside our own galixy there is a new one always changing always finding a new way......hopefuly otherwise imagnation wouldn't exist....
karo

beforewards:
hi i am the author and i am trying to turn this into a webcomic so if you know anyone who is good at drawing...privatemessage me please!
this is the story of a boy from the world we are on this world earth our earth(this is still fiction)who gets teleported to a world beyond anything we could comprehand the world of video and computer games i hope that this story becomes the greatist of all.karo is a achent video game languge meaning bonded now i hope that this story doesn't gain any hate mail...oh and ps just for any noobs out there supersmash bros is a video game(only one which can mesure to halo which is a video game)this story is a part of anthor story about butters who goes to imaganation land to stop the evil of iivl ans save all of imaganation now i hope you injoy the game factor...

[diton 13]

A dark figure walked down the hull of the ship. He was hooded. He suddenly stopped and opened the door. He raised his hand high and went towards the bed. He took his hand and lunged towards the boy. The boy woke up, "a nightmare!", he said. Okay Karo just a dream. Strange that is the same dream I had when I started out. Better go wake up the others, he thought. "Kenny! Wake up lazy!"