I really don't know what I was thinking when I wrote it, but I was bored in German II so. . . .LoL. . .Here it is:
Staring at this closed door
Praying and hoping for something more
Trying to see beyond the glass
Wishing for this pain to pass
Begging for you to be near
'Cause you are all I hold dear
Seeing you standing there
Your sweet aroma filling the air
Joy fills my body, unable to be described
Which I try very hard to hide
Your head turns to glance my way
Shyly smiling, I don't know what to say
Smiling back, you turn and walk away
Moments like this occur everyday
I was trying to go for a girl seeing her crush through a window in a door, him seeing her and smiling and going about his day, and how she reacts to this small thing, which occurs alot. So, hope you enjoy it!
My Poem
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My Poem
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"Man or woman, what we look like is irrelevant anyways, right? It's what's inside that really matters."
~ Haruhi Fujioka, Ouran High School Host Club
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PolarHeat - Posts: 106
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This poem is very close to trochaic tetrameter. You could easily modify it if you so desired.
Your description is nice, as is your conclusion.
Your description is nice, as is your conclusion.
[SIZE="4"][color="DarkSlateBlue"]God has called me to mission work in Paraguay and Brazil. I may return to CAA someday. God bless all of you![/color][/SIZE]
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:
“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Anna Mae - Posts: 1663
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