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I thought about Rping Nadezhda from the book Nadia one of the Heirs of Anton series. so here's a starter. I need some help with my grammar, can anyone give me some pointers?

She lifted her face to the heavens. She silently cursed the alabaster snowflakes that drifted down from the velvety black sky. Great. Perfect. Like she could get anymore cold. Someone up there was definitely laughing at her. She glanced over at the clock tower. Its grand face noted that he was already an hour late. Where was he? Was it possible that KGB got to him first? Her teeth clenched down on the inside of her cheek.

“Stop it Nadezhda! Don’t even think like that.â€

O___________O How could I have missed this?!!! A historical fantasy type story about communist Russia?!!!

I... highly approve!! Except for the whole villifying of us good commies and all that, but seriously that was a most excellent intro and really captured my imagination. Write more, comrade! Write more! I wanna see the KGB torture someone!

KGB? XD Oh--I'm not mocking your story, it just reminded me of the Chairwoman.
Nice descriptions ^^
"Heirs of Anton"? Is that an actual series?

USSR Girl:

I don't mean to make the commies the bad guys, it just was how the book was. And yes, I will write soon when I figure out what's going to happen...

Darkelfgirl:
Chairwoman? Thank you! I really fried my brain over those descriptions. Yeah, they're my favorite books.

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