....I decided to post this as a singular piece. It will be interesting..hmmmm...
"The Late Replyâ€
The Late Reply
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The Late Reply
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
- Zarn Ishtare
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That rocked. Maybe even rawked. You get brownie points with me for mentioning gnomes of course. I liked "Cruci-fiction"... that was cool.
The reflections of light are everywhere
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
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Dunedan - Posts: 128
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Dunedan wrote:That rocked. Maybe even rawked. You get brownie points with me for mentioning gnomes of course. I liked "Cruci-fiction"... that was cool.
is that intentional irony right there?
"Brownie" Points?
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
- Zarn Ishtare
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- Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2004 4:23 am
- Location: HELL HATH NO FURY, AT ALL.
You'll never really know... I have an impish sense of humor.
The reflections of light are everywhere
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
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Dunedan - Posts: 128
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Hehe. 
Well, I have to say that while I glean quite a few things from your poems, I often am left not quite understanding a lot of them. That doesn't stop me enjoying them, though. ^_^
I'm not sure if it was a deliberate mispelling, but you wrote 'counter-fit'. Perhaps this was referring back to the idea of the bottles, cramped spaces etc, or maybe it should be 'counter-feit'?
Either way, t'is good. I really enjoy your poetry, Zarn. ^_^
Well, I have to say that while I glean quite a few things from your poems, I often am left not quite understanding a lot of them. That doesn't stop me enjoying them, though. ^_^
I'm not sure if it was a deliberate mispelling, but you wrote 'counter-fit'. Perhaps this was referring back to the idea of the bottles, cramped spaces etc, or maybe it should be 'counter-feit'?
Either way, t'is good. I really enjoy your poetry, Zarn. ^_^
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[Quote=Photosoph]Well, t'was a good deduction, Mr. Holmes! *salutes Mr. Myoti Sherlock Homes* [/QUOTE]
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
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What do you mean by play with me, anyways?
The reflections of light are everywhere
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
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Dunedan - Posts: 128
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Dunedan wrote:What do you mean by play with me, anyways?
Ask She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Blamed.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
- Zarn Ishtare
- Posts: 1295
- Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2004 4:23 am
- Location: HELL HATH NO FURY, AT ALL.
In the spring of the night,
In the fall of your ironic eyes
Why does this play we might
Spread upon me mayonnaise
-To She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Blamed
In the fall of your ironic eyes
Why does this play we might
Spread upon me mayonnaise
-To She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Blamed
The reflections of light are everywhere
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
Only a gilded age of forgetfulness
A drunken slumber, goodnight but no kiss.
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and to be loved in return."-Christian and later Toulouse, Moulin Rouge
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Dunedan - Posts: 128
- Joined: Fri Sep 02, 2005 9:44 pm
- Location: In a tunnel of hoboes...
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