CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

Okay well, I decided to have another go at this and redo this story. I don't know if anyone is still interested in reading it, but i've been trying to revamp the story a bit and improve it and make it, well, work for me better. I would love some constructive criticism and all that ^^; I hope you all like it! I'm quite busy, but I'm going to try to keep updating this as soon as possible '-' I attached the word file of it, since it's much easier than posting the whole thing right here (which I may do later)

The Prologue captured my interest immediately, enough to make me read the rest. The world has an interesting mix of creatures and such. Please keep posting your story (in smaller, chunks, though!).

Hehe; I agree with Anna Mae. ^_^ Maybe in smaller chunks -though I did really enjoy being able to read such a lot at once. ^_^

I really liked it -I remember reading this before (though you've changed some things), and was really pleased that you'd advanced the story past the point it was last at when I read it. Your descriptions and the whole world is very interesting; you're doing great so far, and I'd love to read more.

A few spelling/grammar errors (exoskeleton is one word, for example), and I think you might want to take out the 'prophesied one' just to keep things a little mysterious about why Anji is there, but that's basically all the suggestions I can offer.
I loved it so far -you're really an excellent writer, Felix. And I really love this story. ^^