"Dwelling Against The Day"

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"Dwelling Against The Day"

Postby Zarn Ishtare » Sun Sep 17, 2006 7:49 am

“Dwelling Against The Dayâ€
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Chibi_wolf454 » Sun Sep 17, 2006 11:56 am

Aww sweet ^^ I love it
[color=Purple] I want to follow my path to be a Manga-Ka [/color]

[color=Indigo] Shadowchild- Chibi's Emo sis. ^^ [/color]

[color=purple]Jaden Mental-Chibi's Neko brother and rp buddy ^^[/color]

[color=DarkOrange]Orenji- Chibi's cupcake friend [/color]

[color=DarkGreen]Kiba kun- Chibi's Onii chan ^^ [/color]

[color=DarkRed]Sigma_knight-Chibi's Neko buddy ^^[/color]


I wonder as I wander. I wonder why I wander and if I will ever go home, it isn't quite clear to me....

What is love?
Is it the hollow emotion that people today so lightly display.
Or is it the sweet smell drifting in the air like an Autem breeze


Poetry by Chibi------enter if you dare......... XD
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Postby Anna Mae » Sun Sep 17, 2006 3:29 pm

Your title is my favorite part. It reminds me of that one hymn (For I know whom I have believ-ed, and am persuaded, that he is able, to keep that, which I've committed, unto him against that day...) My second favorite part is the third line. That is a unique, poetic way to put it.

As to the rest, as usual, your meaning remains a mystery.
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[i]Two vast and trunk-less legs of stone stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand, half sunk, a shattered visage lies. Round the decay of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare the lone and level sands stretch far away. On the pedestal these words are inscribed:

“My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!â€
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Postby Chu-Chu » Sun Sep 17, 2006 3:58 pm

Pretty ^^
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Mon Sep 18, 2006 9:25 am

Who would like me to explain the meaning of this poem?


I'll set up a voting poll.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Fri Sep 22, 2006 10:32 pm

Well, time to explain...


This poem is basically about a few days a week or so ago, when I was having certain dreams. Obviously its not completely the same, but its where the inspiration comes from.


I'm a janitor right now, so I sweep. And the dust never seems to stop coming...its this endless cloud around me.

The cleaner for the metal stalls is crap.

my bike chain broke again.


then the dream which was very good...



then I had a day of cleaning... and sweeping..and moping about work...

then a really really good dream.


and thats it!
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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