CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

ok so here's a poem a wrote!
tell me what you think!


Angel you're always beside me

When I cry you whipe away my tears

when i'm cold you wrape yourself around me.

you find the pieces to my broken heart.

you protect me from Satin

you catch me when i fall

you watch over me when i sleep

you hold my hand when i'm scared

Angel take me away from this place

I know your beautiful but let me see your face.

It okay, There are a coulpe of point where the pome is hard to follow.

Are you referring to a guardian angel type of figure or to JC/God/HolySpirit?

More punctuation in general would be good.

Angel you're always beside me

When I cry you wipe away my tears

when i'm cold you wrap yourself around me.

you find the pieces to my broken heart.

you protect me from Satan

you catch me when i fall

you watch over me when i sleep

you hold my hand when i'm scared

Angel take me away from this place What place? Be more specific.

I know you're beautiful but let me see your face.