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Fictional

PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 9:11 pm
by Mr. SmartyPants
"Fiction"

I found myself in a place well known to me,
I knew this place by heart.
I've been at this place for three years now,
Soon to be four.

The days are the same,
Go, study, work, listen, write, eat.
The days never change,
They are always the same.

The people are the same,
Talking amongst themselves.
Laughing, eating, studying
Together...

They go to class,
Sit down in their seats.
They ask questions
Together....

They walk out of class,
With their heavy bookbags
They chat with each other to their next class
Together...

They walk to their class...
Together...
They eat their lunch...
Together...
They Study, Work, Play, Run, Read
Together... Together... and Together...

Together...
It's always together for them...
Everyday...
Each and everyday...

I walk to my class...
Alone...
I eat my lunch...
Alone...
I Study, Work, Play, Run, Read
Alone... Alone... and Alone...

Alone
It's always alone for me...
Everyday...
Each and Everyday...

I go up to them
Ask a simple question
"Do you know who I am?"
"No" They reply

"I have been here as long as you have"
"How could you not regonize me"
"I do not know you, sorry" They reply
"Leave me alone now, I got to go to class"

Nobody know's me
Nobody recognizes me
Nobody remembers me
What am I?

My nothingness
My unacknowledgement
My nonexistance
Renders me fictional

That's all I am

I'm just fictional

PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 4:35 pm
by Yumie
Nice, Ryan, I like that final line especially!

PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 4:40 pm
by Kami
O_O Wow. I really enjoy reading your poems ! They're so good, I like how the stanzas don't always rhyme. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work !

-Kami

PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 4:57 pm
by SnoringFrog
Very nice poem, I liked it.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 5:19 pm
by bakura_fan
wow. nice.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 8:00 pm
by Linksquest
Yayness! ... FREE VERSE PEOPLE! its called free verse (non rhyming poems... <_<) I really liked the ending. yes, i do see the influence of MONSTER in it. though, i still think its similar to my poem, lol. YAYNESS! you must writes mores of t3h fictionzorz

PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 8:06 pm
by ChristianKitsune
aww that's so sad! but it's really good Ryan! ^^ I loved it!