What did you get for Christmas? (Play)

[holysoldier5000]

My sis and I just finished writing our Church's Christmas play, which we will be preforming. Here it is for all you to read. Tell me what you think?

What did you get for Christmas?

(Samantha and Rachel enter scene)
Rachel: Are you leaving already?
Samantha: Yeah, I really am not much into the whole Christmas thing.
Rachel: Are you sure you won’t come in and enjoy the rest of the party we are about to exchange the gifts.
Samantha: You know what they say, ‘what can you get the person who has everything.’ No I’m just going to head out and on home.
Rachel: Well be careful on your way back. There is a lot of ice on the roads tonight and it’s awfully slick.
Samantha: Don’t worry I’ll be fine.
(Samantha and Rachel exit scene)
(Claries enters the scene siting at the help desk, then Samantha enters the scene)
Samantha: Wow! This doesn’t look like the way home. Where am I? Hey what’s going on here?
(Seeing Claries Sam approaches)
Claries: Welcome. How may I help you?
Samantha: Well you can tell me where I am for starters?
Claries: That’s not as important as where you’re going.
Samantha: Excuse me?
Claries: Now if you will simply answer this one question we can complete all the necessary procedures and you may move on.
Samantha: Look, I just want to know where I am and what’s going on here?
Claries: If you would just simply answer this question right here *hands note pad to Sam* everything will be explained shortly.
Samantha: All right, I’ll answer the question. *Reads notepad* What did you get for… Christmas? What kind of question is that? Is this some kind of joke?
Claries: It’s no joke, and in fact you could say it’s a matter of life and death. Well more of a matter of death really. We are already past that first part.
Samantha: “O…â€

[starwarsboy90]

Sounds like a fairly interesting Chrismas play, cool dude!

[Roll]

Good job, it kept my interest! A couple of typos caught my eye that I thought I'd point out:

Jesus: No my dare child, I am God’s gift to everyone.

Rachel: You just slipped on (a) patch of ice; it’s not like you('re) dead or anything.

[holysoldier5000]

Good job, it kept my interest! A couple of typos caught my eye that I thought I'd point out:

Jesus: No my dare child, I am God’s gift to everyone.

Rachel: You just slipped on (a) patch of ice]('re)[/color] dead or anything.

Hey thanks. I think I posted the un-edited version... oops
I fixed them. If you see any more just let me know.

[rocklobster]

Kind of reminds me of The Last Battle, by C.S. Lewis.

[starwarsboy90]

Nice Avy Holysoldier!