CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

i was a little upset when i wrote this...like moody heh but it came out interesting thought i'd post it and see what ya thought

Kings Of Power

Towards the dark whirling circle
It writhes and wingles
yet it sits so pretty on its throne

Bowed to, worshipped
Sacrificed and praised
Rules with an iron hand

A malice tongue
A simple shove
Little streams of unconscious thoughts

So easy
So easy
to give up and kill

Whispered words
fangs
stealthy daggers

The time has come
Rise up and Fight
bring away the throne of the night

Very good. One thing I rarely catch in your poems that stood out nicely in this one was its meter. Excellent. Almost makes it readable, to me, even though it doesn't rhyme, for the most part. The part where it does rhyme, right at the end is a nice touch, too.

That was great!
Have anymore?
If so I'd like to read them.

well, thats something new. i like new things, so i LOVE that! ^_^

heh *blush thankyou ^_^
yea faithfighter i do ^^ it's in this place too called something like my poetry thread or something, also any churchgirl111 stuff is mine from a previous time ^_^ so i ahve a lot floating around ^^