"Silver Wings"

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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Fri Mar 18, 2005 4:32 pm

Man your all random!^ ^ This is so fun to read
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 4:35 pm

now, mine isn't nearly as detailed or as good as your's, but its fun! ^_^ se gustan mas de mi libro? mas aqui!



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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 4:38 pm

glad that u enjoy it, sora! ^_^ remember, i LOVE to be random. ^_^ btw, i ain't gonna be here tomorrow. i'll be at Disneyland. ya.... so have fun taging each other. don't let them little moster-dudes tag you; they tag with their teeth!
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Fri Mar 18, 2005 6:01 pm

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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 6:07 pm

thank you! *glomps* why haven't u been joining us in our tagging escapade? 'tis lots of fun. ^_^
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Postby Photosoph » Fri Mar 18, 2005 7:38 pm

Yeah, go on; join in! Be random. Have fun! Introduce talking flowers or still-life robots.
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 8:13 pm

eh, probably has other stuff to do. ^_^
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Fri Mar 18, 2005 8:23 pm

Warrior tags Lost and throws a talking flower robot at Photosoph to distract her as he makes a quick get away... into the lounge room. Oh no, he's trapped! The doors are all sealed shut with velcro.
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 8:35 pm

lost comes in behind W4J, and closes the doors behind her. she starts freaking out becuase now there is no light, and she doesn't know if W4J is gonna sneak up on her or not. he might have night vision goggles! lost cowers in a corner, waiting. waiting. waiting.
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Fri Mar 18, 2005 9:27 pm

Lost hears somthing and looks next to her, there she sees Sora A.K.A "Gaming Guru Sushi" huddled in the corner rocking back and forth saing "Keyblade" over and over Lost sloly aproches as SOra jumps up and Does this so called "Tag" Then Sora runs out of the room and runs for the roof, there Sora Jumps off screaming "AH HA PETER PAN YOU AIN'T GOT NOTHING ON ME!" Then relises that in fact she is falling to the ground, after hiting the ground at amazing force she raises her hand and says "Don't worry, I'm fine, the ground broke my fall!" then passes out

Sorry felt like being random too!^ ^
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Postby Photosoph » Fri Mar 18, 2005 10:52 pm

Very cool! Hmm... talking flower robots.... *taps chin reflectively*...

Psoph watches, agonised, as the talking flower robot (from here on known as TFR) spins away from W4J. Its flight path leads it straight to doom: splintering upon the hard cyberfloor.
"NOOOO!!!!" Psoph cries, and lunges for the oddly cute robotic thing. She's aiming for some sort of slow-mo effect, but the CAA computer spites her and reverses it: instead of her going slow while the surroundings continue at normal speed, everything else goes really slow while she and the TFR go at normal speed. The result is a blur in the eyes of anyone watching that has absolutely zero artistic quality, but a lot of spoof potential.
No matter the slow-mo screw up, Psoph snatches the TFR before it smashes upon the cyberfloor. She lands hard, holding the TFR close to her chest. She bounces dramatically (this time the CAA computer has relented and decided to let the actions be slow and artistic) and a cloud of cyberdust lifts from the floor. It dissipates quickly. The two lie still; Psoph's arms wrapped protectively around her precious flower robot. Time passes normally; still neither of them stir.
Psoph's eyes finally open slowly (like Hikaru's on Angelic Layer). She blinks twice, with a dazed look, before finally lifting her head and snapping to attention.
"TFR!" she cries, shocked. Wide-eyed, she peers down at the tiny, felt-covered thing. She slowly sits up and cradles it with great tenderness. Image Tentatively, she prods it on its soft, felt-covered pot.
There's a clicking sound. Then silence prevails.
'Do, do-do-do, do de, dee, do;' the music begins to play. The TFR wiggles from side to side in a painfully corny dance, the mechanical workings inside it clicking and whining.
"TFR!" Psoph cries again, this time with happy tears in her eyes. She cuddles the dancing robot with a peaceful expression, ignoring all else.

Yes. W4J's distraction has definitely worked.

Epilogue:
"TALKING FLOWER ROBOT!!!!! -What need is there for an epilogue when I have this thing?!" :3 X3 :3 X3 *prods TFR* *TFR, with its fake, corny smile and out of date sunglasses, begins to wiggle from side to side as the music resumes*
"Yaaaaaay! Heeee." Image
^(....is obviously too distracted for an epilogue)

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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:08 pm

after watching sora perform this interesting spectacle, she says to herself: "stupid butterflies, stop being so happie!" and wonders why sora thought she was peter pan.

i think this has turned more into a "Tag" roleplay than anything else. but do i care? do i look like i care? no! this is fun!!! *runs around and tags everyone, even if they aren't playing*
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:14 pm

sora! ur awake!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:17 pm

YES!!!
Sora Drags ConfusedChaos doll in because CC isn't here. Pushes button to make the CC doll talk but nothing happens, desides to chech the CC doll batteries, and replaces them. THe CC doll still not working Sora desides to smak it over the head, it finaly works

CC DOll: I'm confused!
ME: Death death, kill kill
CC Doll: Paints? Who needs paints?
ME: HA HA PEATER PAN YOU AIN'T GOT NOTHING ON ME!
CC DOll: Stupid butterflys stop being happy!

And as Sora waits for L9ost to finish up CC Lost and her's motto she posts this
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:20 pm

okay, is everyone ready for a major turning point? i sort of wanted to foreshadow this, but i dont' think i did a very good job... anyway, here's the last of chapter 3. i need to get to work and write s'more! *smacks head* i would like to know your initial reactions to this, or at least as much as u can describe. some ppl that have read this didn't like it too much 'cause it was confusing... but ain't that what fore shadowing is?



The feast was ready: the vilin stacked along the wall like beer barrels, sputtering metallic candles lined the walls of the room, the floating orange-yellow lights illuminated the table. The aroma of roasted meat, and freshly baked golden wafers could be smelled throughout the flet. Curious nose inhaled the delicious night air with the hopes of enjoying the luxurious feast.

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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:22 pm

hehehehe! i go to driving school for the blind! AND i do what the voices in my head tell me.

ya know what? that explains a lot...
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:29 pm

baby shark! do do do do do do
baby shark! do do do do do do
moma shark! do do do do do do
moma shark! do do do do do do
dady shark! do do do do do do
dady shark! do do do do do do
baby shark! do do do do do do!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:30 pm

Yeah You Did Our Motto!^ ^ Now.......................( ^^)>(0_0) Poke!!!! Ahahahahaha
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:34 pm

( *___* )<<<(^_^)
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:35 pm

ur it! *runs and hides* *searches frantically for a place to hide* *sees Kaylin's flet* *runs up the slender ivory steps to the top of the flet* * stops and hides under a table*
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:36 pm

lol

Rock and pool is nice and cool so jucie sweeeet, Our only wish to catch a fish so jucie sweeeeeet......*smaks a fish on a rock*

Sorry, had to, my dad and i were watching it today!^ ^
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:38 pm

without me?!?!?!?! *pokes even harder* (***_____***)<<<<<<<<( '_' )
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Postby LostChild » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:39 pm

Oh you can search far and wide,
you can drink the whole town dry,
but you'll never find a beer so brown, (but you’ll never find a beer so brown)
As the one we drink in our hometown, (as the one we drink in our hometown)!
You can keep your fancy ales,
you can drink them by the flagon,
but the only brew for the brave and true,
comes from the Green Dragon!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:49 pm

GAH!!! Sorry, i thought of you, lol!^ ^;


( *_*)>o <---OH NO!!! GOLLOM HAS GOT THE RING!!!!
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:31 am

Randomness overkill! Does not compute Will Robinson!




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Postby LostChild » Sat Mar 19, 2005 10:11 am

i dunno... ya might wanna get sora's opinion on how things are going... i tried to make it seem a bit obvious that limbar is the bad dude/ chick, but i also wanted it to seem sort of mysterious. like, she could be doing something else that no one knows about. does that make sense? probably doesn't, but that's what i'm aiming for. they're gonna need little detouring adventures, aren't they? krapp, i haven't thought of anything for that! *cries* that's my big delema....

btw sssora, gollum doesssn't have the Ring, remember? i stolesss it, i did. i tooksss it from him when he wassssn't looking, precioussss. stupid... umm... (what is gollum again? he's closly related to hobbits, right? so i can technically call him a hobbit. hehehe *evilish grin* ) ssstupid thin hobbit!!! who eatsess raw fisssshes!
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Postby Photosoph » Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:01 pm

Lol! Will Robinson... I love that quote! I even remember the old series... 0_0 amazing, isn't it? I also remember 'the Land of the Giants' or whatever that used to be on at around the same time.

I found it good. Only, you might have wanted to put the warning at the end because after reading it I might've been a little prepared for what happened. Well, this was my opinion anyway: I found it a little unexpected, but because of the scene with Limbar and her dragon previously in the story, it wasn't out of the blue. There's definitely a lot I don't understand: like, is evil Limbar something that's actually controlling her to be evil while there is actually a part of her that's good? And, what on earth is Limbar planning? As well as lots of unanswered questions as to how her mother disappeared. But those are things I'm thinking will be built on during the rest of the story.

No, the thread could not exist without the story! If not for the story, the tagging would become dead, and would be no more. Besides, we're only all brought together because we're all reading your marvellous writing talents!

Oo -gtg. Seeya later!

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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Sat Mar 19, 2005 8:02 pm

Lol, love the Avey!^ ^ I was just telling my dad and bro about our game of Internet tag and the TFR. Lost my bro told me you got esquarted of the Indena Jones ride at disney land cause it broke down, THATS SO COOL!^ ^ I wana walk in the ride!!!!! TT__TT lol
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Postby Photosoph » Tue Mar 22, 2005 1:00 pm

Thanks! Heh heh, talking flower robots... I loved that, W4J!
That must've been cool Lost! What did all the stuff look like up close?
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Postby LostChild » Tue Mar 22, 2005 6:13 pm

*stammers*w - h - wh - how did he find out?! i didn't tell ya, did i? your bro is scary!

it wasn't all that great. at the very begining, there's these three doors, and you go into one of them. and that's like, 5-10 seconds into the ride. well, we stopped right after we went through the doors, which was about 20 seconds into the ride. my knee started to fall asleep 'cause i'm sort of wearing this brace thing right now... lucky for us, we were in the front row, so i could put my leg up on the hood of the jeep. the dude that came to get us all out walked past us, like, 3 times! "i'll be with ya in a minute," he says. more like half an hour...

anyway, my friend, annie, has her cell phone with her. she calls her dad is like, "hi, dad? can u come pick us up? ... ya, we're stuck in the middle of Indiana Jones... yes, the ride..." and she kept that up for a long time, until she was finally like, "dad, you wouldn't be able to drive in here to get us anyway!" it was great...

so i finally manage to get my leg up on the hood of the car, to get the circulation flowing, and as soon as i do that, the guy shows up to let us out. he's all like, "okay climb down the ladder." and out seat belts won't unhook! duh! we're kinda stuck! it was weird... but totally fun!

we saw broken pottery all over the floor, and weeds growing from out of holes in the wall. the sort of stuff that is there just to be there, and no one ever sees it. sort of like all the extra scenes, and characters from the LOTR movies, huh? we figured they put it all there to entertain people when they get stuck on the ride. just to make us wonder why they put it there...

long before the guy came to get us out, we wondered what we would do if there was a fire, since we were sort of locked in our seats. melissa had some nail clippers. she said she would cut herself free, and leave us all there to die. nice, ain't it?

well, we finally get off, and they give us a free pass to go on another ride of our choice, right? well, katlyn hadn't been on Indiana Jones before, so we just waited, and got back on when it was running again. we almost had to be escorted off again, but then it started back up. it was great...

so, it was annie's birthday. we got some funnel cakes at club buzz in tomorrow land to celebrate (we were there alone, none of our parents were even in the park). i was thinking, that i'd always wanted for someone to shove my face in my birthday cake. well, seeing as how it wasn't my birthday, i'd have to wait for three more years... i figured, "what the heck!" scooped up a big handfull of whipped cream, and threw it in her face! for like, the next half an hour, whipped cream went everywhere! i had fun.

soo... want more story? where am i at? ....
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