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Postby CAAOutkast » Fri May 12, 2006 7:33 am

i need your help in getting capcom to listen to my anime/manga/comic idea..but i cant find their e-mail addresss.
i would go to another company,but this series has some of their characters in it. help me please. here is my series idea its called Street Fighter Xzero:

STREET FIGHTER X zero EPISODE GUIDE:
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1) BEGINNING:bison finds out about a 'rosemary's baby' type child (krista gabrial)with incredible power and plans to capture her while at the park with her parents the child wanders off on her own.bison kidnaps the child and takes her to his headquarters in shadaloo.when it's time to go home.the parents look for their daughter but fail to find her and start getting worried)(hours later at bisons HQ, bison decides to clone the child so that he can have 2 super warriors to train.in his lab,bison's scientists clone the child ,but the original{said to be the clone}was christ-like and the clone{said to be the original} was totally psycho.bison trys to kill the christ-like child ,but fails when he is stoped by a godly force.bison than tells zangeif to bring the girl back to her parents while he trains the psycotic one,the wrestler asks why,and bison tells him that she's(the good child)is too christ-like to train and that the evil kid is much stronger,he than says that he only trains the strong ones.thanks to the information he got from the good child, zangief takes the her back to her parents house{a medium sized mansion},ring the bell and go back to shadaloo.the butler answers and tells his employers that their daughter has come home,the parents{the gabrials}are really happy to see their daughter back.while the gabrials continue to raise their daughter{the task is a bit easier this time},bison trains and raises the evil child whom he names, calli.


to be continued.the best is yet to come.

so,what do you think.

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Postby CAAOutkast » Fri May 12, 2006 10:01 am

ya'll can reply any time.
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Postby Syreth » Fri May 12, 2006 11:56 am

I would try to be more helpful, but I haven't played Street Fighter, so I'm not familiar with any of the characters. Hmm... sorry to say, but I can't think of any way to help capcom to listen to your idea. The story sounds somewhat interesting, but I think it would do a lot better with original characters. That's just my opinion, though. Who knows? If you think God is leading you to write a story for a manga, write it out and maybe put it in the writer's section. Even if you can't get ahold of capcom or they don't accept it, it will still be rewarding if it's what God wants you to do.

Maybe if you give it a little more time, someone else will be able to help you more with your idea. :thumb:
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Postby CAAOutkast » Fri May 12, 2006 1:41 pm

thanks for answering,I get ignored on this board almost all of the time. that kind of makes it hard to make friends..espesially with the moderators and administrators.

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Postby Syreth » Fri May 12, 2006 2:21 pm

Hey, I know where you're coming from. It is hard to make friends on a message board, but if you're friendly and make good and meaningful contributions, it'll happen with time.

Oh, maybe it would be good to get your idea scripted or in short story form and then you could post it in the writing forum like I suggested earlier. It might be a good idea to even give some backgrounds of the characters (should you decide to go with the streetfighter characters). That way, those who are interested in helping could look at your story more objectively and help you to refine your ideas.
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Postby Raiden no Kishi » Fri May 12, 2006 2:42 pm

I'll tell you this: the best way to make friends in a community is to get involved. As you spend time here on CAA, you get to know people and you steadily become more a part of the community.

Also, I would recommend getting an avatar. I don't think it really adds to your being part of the community, but it's a great way to express yourself.

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Postby CAAOutkast » Fri May 12, 2006 6:40 pm

cool. heres 3 more eps for the CAA to review. BTW,the main character,krista,is a christian.

2) GUILE'S VISIT:years later, guile visits the gabrial family,and notices krista's abnormal strength, meanwhile bison is continuing training calli.during his visit,guile talks to the gabrials about krista's power,and tells them that if she's trained properly she can be a great help in the street fighter's war against evil , he than asks if he can train her.the parents argue with guile and tell him that it's a bad idea,krista comes in and tells them that she want's to learn to be a great fighter and to save the world,the parent's ask her why,and krista tells them that God's calling her to be a defender of truth and justice.after thinking it over,her parents still say no,guile says it's a shame and he leaves.meanwhile,back at shadaloo, bison is giving calli her first injection of psycho power{via a machine}and claims that calli will be his ultimate warrior and that with her ,he will enslave the planet in no time

3)NATURAL BORN KILLER:at street fighter hq,guile is talking to escher about krista and telling him how important it will be if they have her on the team,escher tells him that he'll think about it and leaves)(krista and her family are at the beach,krista is playing in the sand,the parents are sun bathing and talking to each other,and bobby is surfing.at bison's HQ,bison is giving calli{who is wearing a purple m.bison outfit} instructions for her 'power test' mission...her mission is to kill the gabrial family. bison gives calli a scouter so she can find her targets,calli takes the scouter and leaves for her mission.back at the beach, guile meets up with the gabrial family and asks them if they changed their mind about krista learning to be a fighter,the parents tell him that he answer is still no.krista comes over to say hello to guile and asks him about the training,guile appologizes and tells her that her parents said no,krista gets angry. calli locates her targets on her scouter and arrives infront of her victims,guile asks the child who she is)(everyone is shocked to find out that the girl looks just like krista,calli introduces herself and tells the group about her mission.after words between the good guys and calli , calli strikes like lightning and kills krista's mother than her father.everyone but krista is shocked..krista is saddened and angry.calli laughs and says she's enjoing this,just as she is about to kill bobby,krista attacks her. calli curses at krista and attacks her,but krista vows to make her pay and uses an enegry blast that almost destroys calli.krista faints and calli escapes vowing revenge.hours later back at bison's HQ,bison is yelling at calli for getting only half the mission done,he than scolds her for getting beaten by a weak little girl,calli snaps back and tells him that krista was stronger than they both realized.bison gets mad and leaves.at her parents funaral,krista asks guile if he would train her,and guile says yes, bobby than announces that he will be joining the US army,guile gives him a thumbs up.

4) TRAINING BEGINS:in the gabrials back yard,guile is training krista.in bison's hq, bison is training calli.later that day,guile takes krista to SFHQ and introduces her to the commishiner of the A.N. and the street fighter's adviser, escher,.escher welcomes kirista to the team,and guile tells escher that krista's older brother just joined the US army, escher says that's great and tells the 2 that he has some work to do at the A.N.escher says goodbye, and than leaves.meanwhile,back at bison's, bison is still training call, and after the training bison sends calli to finish krista and guile.back at krista's backyard,krista continues her training with guile,miniutes later calli arrives and threatens the heroes and attacks, guile and krista both fight calli.calli manages to beat guile and after a few rounds of fighting krista beats calli with guile's 'sonic boom' .calli vows revenge and teleports away using her teleporter belt .krista checks on guile and he's ok they than talk for awhile about how the battle against evil will be much more difficult than before, krista tells guile that she's up for the challange and that if bison and his guys want a fight than they shall get one,she than tells guile that she's really hungry.guile laughs.


so what do yo thinkI have alot more.

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Postby Rogie » Fri May 12, 2006 6:57 pm

Since this thread is moving in that direction, I'm moving this to Writing.
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Postby CAAOutkast » Fri May 12, 2006 9:18 pm

cool with me.

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Postby CAAOutkast » Sat May 13, 2006 10:13 am

heres some more.

5) QUIN JANUS:7 years have past and krista is now a teenager.while going for a morning jog,when she see's a group of african american girls beating up on a white christian man while cursing at him,calling him names and dissin' jesus.krista goes over to them and trys to reason with them,but that fails and the girls attack.krista beats the girls and their leader quin arrives.quin's team explains that krista interfered with their work,quin gets angry,introduces herself and attacks krista.after a long fight krista beats quin,quin vows revenge and leaves with her gang.later that day,inside a werehouse,the girls and quin are talking to the rest of their gang ,when their leader, jerred bullba{without his metal facial peice}arrives and blasts quin's team for losing to that girl and making the entire gang look bad.quin apologizes,and bullba tells her that she must go on a solo mission to redeem herself. quin asks what kind of mission ,and bullba tells her that her mission is to kill the pope,while he is here in america.quin excepts the mission,and leaves.bullba than tells his team that if quin fails this,he will kill her.quin is walking alone in the park thinking about her past and how she joined bullba's gang ,after having her flashback ,she wonders if joining a gang was a bad idea.quin sees krista jogging,gets angry,and confronts her.quin tells krista that she wants a rematch,krista asks quin what her problem is,quin tells her that her pride has been hurt and killing her will ease the pain.krista tells her that she has a problem and than starts telling her about jesus .after some of the stuff about christ sinks into her head,quin has second thoughts about bullba's gang.bullba arrives and tells quin to kill krista,quin refuses and bullba attacks the traitor.krista saves quin from being finished off,and fights bullba herself.bullba vows revenge and than retreats.deejay arrives and tells the girls that he saw the fight,krista tells deejay that quin is badly hurt and needs medical attention.deejay and krista take quin to the hospital.deejay tells krista that he might train quin when she gets better,and quin tells them that she would like that.back at his hideout bullba vows to destroy krista gabrial.

6)BISON AND BULLBA:while on his mission to kill the pope in rome,jerred bullba is noticed by bison.after bullba kills the pope with his psychic powers,bison appears and offers bullba and his gang a job.and after bison tells them about it ,bullba and his gang except the offer.bullba and his gang leave for shadaloo with bison.meanwhile,quin is living with deejay and is being trained by him.bullba's gang is being trained to become bison troopers and calli becomes jealous when bison starts to favor bullba more.bison sends bullba and his gang{bison troopers in training}to hunt down and kill the street fighters,starting with guile and krista.guile and krista are sparing in the park ,when bullba and his gang attack,after afew words,the fight begins.after a couple of rounds the bad guys loose and retreat.back at shadaloo hq,bullba is getting pumped with psycho power with bison watching and saying that bullba's loss was just a setback..and that bullba's natual psychic power makes him a valuable ally,and that he,bullba and calli will make an ustoppable team , he than laughs evily.

well what do you think? I have alot more. If you have any Questions about this series or any other works of mine,please let me know.

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Postby CAAOutkast » Wed May 17, 2006 4:31 pm

7)SON OF THE TOUGHEST WOMAN IN THE WORLD:krista ,deejay,quin ,and guile go to china to stop a sex-trade ring owned by wo-fat.while looking for some leads on finding the rings hideout, they meet up with a teenage boy who looks like chun-li,who was also looking for the sex-traders.after introductions are over,the boy{chun-wa aka walter}tells the team that his mother knows where those sex-traders are,and that they can talk about it at his house where his mom is.chun-wa leads the team to his house,he calls for his mom and she comes out,the team is shocked to find out that his mother is chun-li.chun-li invites them in ,and tells them about how she met her husband{an [caucasian]american missionary who came to china}, chun-wa's birth, how her husband was killed by wo-fat, and how she started training chun-wa}.guile asks if she knows where the sex traficer's hideout is.After chun-li tells them where the hideout is{???}, the heroes {chun-li and son included}leave to go there.at the sex trafickers hideout, the gang is taking calls from custumers who want to buy their prostitutes{kidnapped girls 14-20 locked up in a cell,until they are bought}.outside,just as one of the thugs is about to bring a young girl to his boss,the heroes come and beat him up,the girl thanks them and leaves.the heroes bust in ,fight ,beat up and capture the villians, they than free the girls.later,while the police are taking the sex-traders to jail, guile complements chun-wa and tells him that his mom trained him well, chun-li thanks the heroes for their help.krista asks the othersif they know of a good place to eat.the others laugh.

8)THE SORCERESS' WARRIOR:while the new pope is talking to a jam-packed croud at the annual world youth day, a teenage warrior{ryan clover} beats the him to death and quickly escapes.inside the gabrial home,krista and guile are watching the news report about the popes murder.they than get a call from escher, telling them to get to SFHQ at once. at SFHQ,escher tell the 2 that they must stop a warrior who keeps killing Religious figures in america,and that his recent attack was on the pope,he than tells them that he has sent the whole street fighter team on this mission and that they are scatered around the country scouting the streets,waiting for the villian to show himself.inside an abandoned castle,the sorceress,eden is congradulating ryan for killing the pope,and that his next mission is to kill gordon robison,president of the christian broadcasting company,ryan leaves with out questioning the order.eden tells herself that her evil plan{to rid the america of christians},and that with ryan under her spell no one can stop her,not even the street fighters)(on the streets of virginia, Cammy is scouting the streets for ryan,she sees him going into the cbc building. cammy contacts escher and tells him ryan is at the cbc building and is going in after him.inside the building,ryan is beating up the security,cammy enters and follows him, inside a studio,gorden robison is interveiwing a guest on his tv show,when ryan busts in and just as he is about to kill gordon,cammy enters and attacks ryan,she than tells ryan that he mus fight outside,ryan agrees .outside the building,cammy is fighting ryan...after a few rounds ryan beats cammy,and just as he's about to finish her,guile and krista arrive and fight him)(krista beats ryan,eden appears and introduces herself.eden challanges krista to a fight and krista excepts.after a few rounds krista beats eden,eden transforms into her true self{a demon}and continues the fight.after krista kills eden,eden's corps turns to ashes and ryan is freed from her control)(while krista and ryan talk about what happened,the cops come and take ryan to jail.ryan thanks krista while he's being carted off by the cops.cammy thanks krista and guile for saving her.after a few words,the team goes home.

9)ADVANCED TRAINING:while training in deejay's yard,quin tells deejay that she's gonna join pro-wrestling to make some extra money,{deejay's rich because of his music}.after they talk about it,deejay allows her to become a wrestler.in krista's backyard,guile is sparing with krista,krista calls guile's training too easy for her and that she want's a training challange.Guile tells krista that his friend has a gym where the training is harder.krista asks him where the gym is,and guile gives her a card that tells has the gym's adderess and phone number;krista leaves {by using her natural ability to fly}and tells guile that she will be back soon.krista arrives at the gym and enters it,and sees no one there.as krista walks and looks around,she is greeted by sakura,the gym's co-owner,sakura.sakura introduces herself and asks krista who she is, krista tells her that she's here to be trained by a woman named rose..sakura tells krista that rose isn't excepting students,krista tells sakura that her trainer,guile sent her to get advanced training .sakura challanges krista to see if
she's strong enough for rose's training.after a couple of rounds krista beats sakura.rose comes in,introduces herself, and asks krista why she has come.krista tells rose that she want's to be trained by her, rose tells her that she must battle her,and if she does well...she'll train her.after a long hard battle krista wins and rose keeps her word to trains her)(after eating krista begins her training under rose..starting with the gravity chamber)(rose sets the gravity{via gravity machine}to a low level and the difficult training officialy begins.

Feel free to tell me what you think.

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Postby CAAOutkast » Thu May 18, 2006 7:00 pm

149 CAA Members veiwed my stuff. Thank you. here's more.

10) QUEEN OF DARKNESS:during the annual fighting street tournament an evil woman arrives and kills the participents and all of the fans in the arena,she than laughs and vows to avenge her husbands loss at the 10th SF tournament by killing every fighter in the world.meanwhile,krista is still training in the gravity room,while rose is reading the bible just outside the room,wondering if krista has what it takes to save the world and sakura is coaching the other members of roses gym as they train hard.during their vacation at thier country side resort,karin,her husband,and their sons are attacked the queen of darkness, the evil queen kills everyone,karin gets upset and fights the dark queen and loses,the queen picks up a high power reading on her scouter and leaves to find that power.back at rose's gym, rose feels an evil presence and moments later,the evil queen shows up,and picks a fight with the gym members.after the villianess beats up on the gym members,she senses rose on her scouter and goes to her.when she gets there, the queen has a small conversation with rose and than chalanges her to fight, after afew rounds the queen beats rose, krista arrives and saves rose from being finished off.the evil queen sees krista's power level on her scouter, krista gets mad and challanges the evil queen to a battle outside ,the queen excepts and the fighters go outside.the evil queen beats krista and promises to kill krista and rose later.she than leaves to complete her mission.

11) NEW TECHNIQUE:at the gym, rose and krista are talking about the previous fight ,when sakura tells rose to teach krista the flash body technique, rose says that krista is to young to use it,but after arguing about it rose teaches krista the flash body.meanwhile the evil queen is continuing her killing spree on warriors{non hero ones},while on her break she get a power reading on her scouter she leaves to check it out.while krista continues her training, ken and his family are playing in the local park, dark queen attacks and kills ken's family. a devistated ken fights tha dark queen and loses.the queen than gets an even bigger power reading on her scouter, and leaves to check it out. the queen arrives at rose's gym, and shouts out a challange to the fighter with the strongest power, krista comes out of the gym and after some some words, the 2 fight and after a few rounds krista kills the queen with the flash body.krista faints from the fight and rose carries her back into the gym telling her that she did well.


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Postby CAAOutkast » Fri May 19, 2006 4:41 pm

Now Y'all are wondering Why I keep posting my stories when no one on this site cares for them that much. well I'm hoping that oneday they will be noticed. I refuse to give up. Jesus wouldn't want me to give up either. I do this not only for Me,but for Christ and the planet. One of my dreams is to Revolutionize the Street Fighter Series. By bringing Christian themes to It.

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Postby CAAOutkast » Tue May 23, 2006 9:24 am

One Day I will Give you all a detailed explination of the rolls of the original series characters.

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Postby CAAOutkast » Tue May 30, 2006 9:32 am

heres more..enjoy

12) STORM WARNING:dr. ami henderson creates a storm machine to destroy the world.guile and the others think the storm just natural, but krista doubts it due to it being so strong, she sees a device in the air and she believes that the device is causing the storm, she tries to destroy it but fails.krista tells guile that a device in the sky is what's causing the storm.krista destroys the machine,but the storm continues, she than notices a few more machines,she destroys them and the storm stops, she than brings one of the destroyed machines back to hq. back at hq, ecsher reconizes the machine as one of dr. hendersons creations, he than is told that dr. henderson's machines are causing storms all over the world,so he sends sean , honda, r.mika, blanka , and guile to destroy the machines while krista and cammy raid dr. hendersons lab and stop her from creating any more evil inventions. later, the street fighters{in their jet}travel the world and destroy the machines.krista and cammy raid dr.hendersons lab and meet up with dr.henderson, they tell dr.H that they know that she created the weather machines, the heroines try to reason with the villianess, but it fails.henderson calls for her battle suit,gets in it and fights the heroes, after a few vrounds of fighting the heroes destroy the battle suit and henderson dies instantly, they than take the body outside and blow up hendersons lab with their energy attacks.they bury the dead dr. ami henderson and leave. back at hq, ecsher thells the heroes that the worlds weather is back to normal and than congradulates them on a job well done, after that krista leaves for roses gym to train more.

13) YEARS LATER:ryan clover gets out of jail and joins the UFC;quin finishes her training with deejay; bison gives bullba a titanium-zero cybernetic head peice to increase his psycho power;calli is almost finished mastering her powers;ken and ryu start their own dojo in america's countryside..taking the book of akuma {a forbiden book}with them.....not only that but months later they choose 2 students of exact opposits,a hispanic boy named carlos and an asian boy named lao;guile is on vacation;cammy is teaching arobics at a new jersey gym;e. honda is teaching sumo wrestling in japan;karin is working as the president of her father's billion dollor business;sakura is away..visiting her granchildren;chun-li and her son are still fighting corruption all over the world;blanka is living peacfully in central america;t.hawk has quit the street fighters and now is raising a family;r.mika has also quit the street fighters and pro-wrestling, she now is an amature body builder;fei-long and dan are still making kung-fu movies...as well as fighting corruption;juli and juni are living a peacful normal life ;and finally krista has begun mastering her training.

14) THE FIGHTING STREET TOURNAMENT:krista,ryan,quin,chun-wa,chun-li,and, cammy participate the fighting street tournament and are 6 of 8 participents{they each made it through the preliminary battle royal}.krista and friends meet carlos and lao{the other 2 participants}and find out that they are ryu and ken's prized students.ryu and ken tell the others about how they met carlos and lao and took them on as their students{ryu and ken where on a scouting mission to get 2 special students,until finaly they found the 2 that they were looking for, one was carlos: a trouble maker and was lao: a shy pacifist type. ryu and ken trained carlos and lao for years and during that time the boys started to change their ways, carlos gave up his troublemaking lifestyle and lao learned how to be a brave fighter for good, who will never shy away from a fight}.the m.c. than announces to the croud that the fighting street tournament will begin in t- 2 minutes in counting, the heros hear the announcement and leave the locker room area for the ring.

15) THE TOURNAMENT BEGINS:the first first round fight is: cammy white vs. chun-li xiang, after a long fight cammy ends up winning; the second first round fight is: ryan clover vs. carlos silvio, after a long fight carlos ends up winning; the third first round fight is: Walter Xiang vs.Lao Sung Pak,after a long fight lao ends up winning; the forth first round fight is: krista gabrial vs. quin janus, after a long fight krista ends up winning.the m.c. than announces that the semi-final round battles will begin in t- 10 minutes in counting.

16) THE SEMI-FINALS:the first semi-final round fight is: cammy white vs. carlos silvio, after a long fight carlos ends up winning;the second semi-final round fight is: lao sung pak vs. krista gabrial, after a long fight krista ends up winning.carlos vows to get even with krista for his friends loss.the m.c. announces that the finals will begin in t-10 minutes in counting.

17) THE FINALS:carlos and krista fight in the finals and after a long hard faught match, krista becomes the fighting street champion and she and carlos become friends.later on carlos,ryu,ken,and lao say goodby to our heroes and go back to the shotakan dojo.
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Postby CAAOutkast » Wed May 31, 2006 9:27 am

Heres more:

18) A GIRL NAMED IRIS :bullba and his gang rob the lab of dr. murry,the famous robotics scientist.dr.murry comes in and sees the gang take his most important documents,bullba kills the doctor,the doc's daughter ,iris sees the murder and bullba threatens to kill her later after he delivers the documents to dr.greg henderson{bullba's not very smart telling iris his plan}.the gang escapes with the documents and iris crys over her dead father, meanwhile bullba and his gang are inside dr, greg hendersons lab giving him the stolen documents,henderson tells the gang that he needed the plans to get revenge on the street fighters for killing his wife,ami. after bullba and his gang get paid,they leave talking about killing iris, the only witness to dr.murry's murder.while iris is walking home from the funeral{the funeral parlor is not that far from iris' house}, iris barely escapes a drive-by-shooting by bullba's gang. iris uses a near by pay-phone and calls the police,but the line is busy.she than realizes the people who just did the drive-by were bullba's guys,so she decides to call the street fighters,howerver just befor she makes that call bullba's guys attack iris.krista and cammy arrive from out of nowhere and beat up the gang,the gang gets back into their car and drives off ,vowing revenge.after iris expresses her thanks,the heroes take her back to hq,where iris explains everything.escher asighns cammy and krista to be iris' body guards until bullba's gang is captured,he than asighns guile and blanka to go to dr. greg hendersons lab and get back those documents.after ecsher finds the location of the hendersons lab, blanka and guile leave for their mission in their jet. meanwhile, cammy and krista walk iris home. while the heroes are walking her home,iris tells them about her past . when the heroes reach iris' home,they find bullba and his gang waiting for them.after making threats and telling the heroes how he found out where iris lived, bullba attacks..along with his gang.after the heroes beat the gang , the gang retreats but bullba stays and mocks the heroes, iris vows vengence and bullba beats up on her, krista gets mad and beats up bullba.bullba vows revenge and leaves, the heroes take iris inside her house so that she can rest up, krista comments on how durable iris is and that she should get some fight training .guile and blanka raid dr. hendersons lab and get the documents back, henderson arrives and tells the street fighters that it's too late and that he has already made copys of the document.before blanka and guile could place dr. henderson under arrest, the mad scientist telleports away with all of his import documents..including the copy of dr. murry's.hours later at hq, escher congradulates the heroes for a job well done, cammy volonteers to train iris and to let her live with her, iris is happy and thanks the heroes, krista tells everyone that she is going to join the US millitary.

19) G.I. KRISTA:after krista tells rose and sakura about her decision to join the american millitary, she hugs them goodby and leaves for the local army acadamy.at the army acadamy, krista {along with 12 other people}fills out an entry form and than is given a physical, after krista passes her physical she gets fitted for her uniform.later, sargent steve 'mongo' mcmichael is welcolming krista and the other new recruits,after his short speech about army life he tells them to run 20 laps around the acadamy's track.at the track, the sargent {as well as the other new cadets}gets a surprise when krista finishes the 20 lap run in just 2 minutes, after his breif shock, the sargent tells the new recruits to get ready for hand-to-hand combat trainingafter they finish their lap, the sargent than asks for krista's name,krista tells him and he asks if she is related to liutenent bobby gabrial, krista says that she is, the sargent than tells krista to rest up for the hand-to-hand combat training.meanwhile,at rose's gym, cammy is training iris, rose and sakura are amazed at how well iris is learning from cammy.back at the millitary acadamy, krista and the others are ready for hand to hand combat training , krista beats everyone in the sargent's combat training.the sargent is impressed and tells everyone to prepare for the obstical course. at the obstical course,krista aces the obstical course while the other cadets don't. the sargent leaves the area to a private place and calls general briggs at the pentagon on his cell phone.the sargent tells general briggs that they might have their own super soldier, in the form of krista gabrial, the general says that he'll be right over.the sargent returns to the cadets and tells krista that the general of the u.s. faction of the a.n. millitary is coming to see her, the other cadets are shocked and krista is surprised.

20) THE GENERAL'S TESTS:the general arrives at the acadamy and greets sargent mcmichael ,who is with krista.general briggs asks if krista is the so called"super soldier", sargent mcmichael answers with a yes.general challanges krista to a series of contests to see if she really is a super soldier and if she wins them all he will instantly promote her to sargent of the u.s. faction of the a.n. ,but if she doesn't pass them all she will remain at the acadamy, krista tells the general that she will try her best.the generals first test is: leadership training {krista must train the new cadets and than lead them in a mini-war game, where the group is split into 2 teams}.krista passes the first test and gets ready for the second: running the ultra obstical course}.krista passes the obstical course and is ready for the next test, so for the final test general briggs challanges krista to a battle.krista wins and the general promotes her and calls her a real super soldier.

The Series Gets Better..Trust Me. I hope To Have someone Help Me Turn this into A Manga.

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Postby CAAOutkast » Thu Jun 01, 2006 7:39 am

21) A DAY OF THE PSYCHOS:at the shotakan dojo,carlos and lao are training with ryu and ken, when calli appears and steal the book of akuma saying that with her psycho power and akuma's fighting style she will be invincible,when ryu and ken try to stop her..calli kills them both, carlos and lao get sad and angry and attack calli and lose, calli laughs and leave. carlos and lao mourn their teachers death and than arrange a funeral.back in china, chun-li and her son are in the middle of busting a millitary arms ring{the weapons are stolen goods}, when bullba appears and tells them to mind their own **** bussines and to leave his gang alone, chun-li refuses and fights bullba,she loses and bullba kills her, walter gets angry and fights bullba.after walter loses bullba and his men escape to bison's fortress with the remaining millitary weapons, saddened and angry chun-wa vows to get even with bullba.back at bison's fortress bison congradulate bullba and his gang for successfully selling most of the weapons,and that they can keep the profits for them selves, bison tells bullba that he has a special solo assighnment for him, kill the rest of the street fighters one by one starting with guile , bullba gets exciited and tells his mentor that it gives him a warm and fuzzy feeling when he kills people, bison hugs him and calls him 'son', afterwards bullba leaves for his assighnment.at roses gym, iris is sparring with cammy, when calli arrives to fight the heroines.after calli taunts the good guys, the fight begins and calli ends up winning. calli laughs and tells the 2 warriors that she can finish them off any time she wants, calli than leaves.krista and a visiting guile{the army let him visit krista because he is a close friend, and a well known ex-colonel} are talking and eating lunch at the millitary acadamy, when bullba appears, tells them the reason he's here and attacks the heroes,krista and guile fight him.bullba kills guile, and krista is devistated, gets sadded and angered, she than beats bullba to a pulp.a battered bullba escapes back to shadowloo city, krista vows to destroy bullba, she than leaves to arrange a funeral for her dead mentor.3 funerals where arranged that day, 1 in china for chun-li , 1 in the american countryside for ryu and ken, and finally a millitary type funeral for guile.

22) ON TO THE FINAL BATTLE:2 days after the funeral, at a.n. hq,in new york , the general gives krista a mission to raid the shadowloo organization{bison's fortress} in shadowloo city and get the stolen weapons back ,he than tells her that she will be promoted to colonel if she is successful, krista tells the general that she's ready, the general assighns 2 rookie cadets to help her out: the vernon sisters{sabrina and kelly}.meanwhile, escher retires, and gives his job as hero commander to his neice and a.n. commishiner, morgan.krista and her 2 partners leave for bison's fortress in a millitary carrier jet.in bisons fortress, calli is in a secret area reading akuma's book, bullba is chilling with his gang in the back room ,and bison sences krista coming and figures out that she might be after the stolen weapons, he than tells {on his p.a. system}his troops to get ready for a battle, calli and bullba get excited and can't wait.when the heroes arrive at bison's base, zangief and some bison soldiers attack them. after the ladies beat zangeif and the soldiers, they enter the fortress, krista tells sabrina and kelly to find the weapons while she stops bison and his goons,after kelly and sabrina leave to find the weapons, krista moves on to find bison.bison watches krista via security camera, and says that she's stronger than he realized, he than sends soldiers to stop the vernon sisters from finding the weapons, and vows that he will win.krista arrives in a strange arena-like room,where bullba appears and challanges krista to a 1-on-1, krista tells bullba that he will pay for killing guile, bullba laughs and tells her that 1 more white guy dead, means the closer blacks are to owning the world. krista gets **** and fights bullba.krista wins and bullba escapes, with bullba out of the way krista is able to move on, until finally she reaches the outside of bison's chambers, calli appears.after some words, krista and calli fight, calli loses, and tells krista that they will meet again and nextime she will win, calli than leaves.krista enters bison's chambers and the evil mastermind is their to greet her, bison tells krista that he's impressed with her power and offers her to be his right hand woman ,krista tells him that she is god's right hand woman and would never betray him for anything or anyone.bison calls her a foolish **** and that if she doesn't live as his servent than she will die, krista tells bison that he's the one that's going to die.bison and krista fight,and after a few rounds...krista loses.
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Postby CAAOutkast » Thu Jun 01, 2006 7:41 am

23)THE FUTURE IS COMING:the vernon sisters find the weapons and get attacked by bison troopers.an injured krista, continues to battle bison, and with the power of christ..as well as a flash body at 2x the power, krista beats bison, as krista starts to celebrate her win, the vernon sisters{on the comunicator}tell her that they have neted the stolen weapons and are on their way out of the fortress, krista congradulates them and tells them to wait for her outside.before leaving , krista tells bison that she will spare his life and that he should give up his sinfull ways , bison tells her to go to hell, krista chuckles and tells him that that's where he will be going if he doesn't ask jesus for forgiveness and give up sin.krista tells bison that he can give up his evil ways and live a better life if he just gives jesus a chance.after she tells him to think about it, krista leaves.an hour later bison is still in his chambers, vowing to kill krista if it's the last thing he does, bullba enters and is **** at bison for losing to a christian, bison tells him that he will not make that mistake again,he than tells bullba that he failed to beat krista more than once,and that he's no better than him, bullba gets ultra ****, calls bison a stupid white guy and kills him, some soldiers run in and bullba tells them to take the bison's body outside and burn it, the soldiers do just that.after bullba calms down, he uses the p.a. system to tell everyone that bison has died and that he will be taking over the organization and renaming it 'bullba incorperated' he also announces plans for bullba inc's first creation: a flying mini-fortress known as the 'brotha ray'.he also tells them that all of bison's henchmen and soldiers are officialy fired, and his gangs will become bullba troopers: m.p.'s that will work for bullba inc. he than tells everyone that he will be scouting the globe for some new super human henchmen.at the millitary acadamy, krista is being honored for being successful in her mission and is being promoted to colonel of the u.s. faction of the a.n. millitary in a graduation-type ceremony..everyone krista knows is there, the general even gives a speech.meanwhile, in a wasteland a portal opens and a woman steps out,and begins her search for the strongest evil power in the world. {what's this woman up to? find out on the finale of street fighter x zero}

24) THE FUTURE IS HERE:bullba travels the globe and finds 6 of the fiercest super humans ever.back at bullba inc scientists have halfway completed the brotha ray mini-fortress.krista meets commishiner morgan steiner for the first time ever{thanks to general briggs}.At rose's gym, Krista teaches her teamates flash body,and the team teaches her some of their attacks.the mysterious woman's search for the strongest evil power in the world continues, she than remembers m.bison as the strongest evil power in the world and leaves for shadowloo city to meet him.in shadowloo city, the woman arrives at bullba inc. bullba troopers approach the woman and she asks where m.bison is, the troops tell her that bison is dead and jerred bullba is now in controll, the woman asks the troopers if bullba is strong and evil ,the soldiers tell her yes, the woman asks the troops to bring bullba out to her, the troops ask her what business she has with their boss, the woman gets mad and kills one of the soldiers.the woman tells the living soldier to get bullba and to be quick about it, the soldier leaves to get bullba, the woman checks her scouter for more strong powers, she finds some, bullba comes out and meets the woman.the woman reads bullba's power on her scouter and is impressed, bullba asks the woman who she is and what she wants,the woman tells bullba that she would like to go someplace where they can talk in private, bullba suggests his personal quarters, but the woman warns him that she is much stronger than he is and that hitting on her is a very dangerous thing, bullba than asks her where she would like to go,the woman tells bullba that they will go to the local wastelands.bullba and the woman fly off to the wastelands,once there, the woman introduces herself as rei hero,the street fighter champion and feared intergalactic warlord, she than tells bullba that she wants someone to hold the title for her while she's doing the warlord thing{she can't defend her title and dominate galaxies at once}, she than asks what happened to bison, bullba tells her that he killed him for losing so many times.rei asks bullba if he is worthy of holding the title of street fighting champion while she's away, bullba says yes and that he is a well known gang master,bison's prized student, and new leader of bison's organization.after bullba gives rei a breifing on his achivements, rei crowns bullba as the new SF champion, and tells him that one day she will return to reclaim the title, she uses a pocket device to open up a portal and leaves through it.after the portal closes, bullba decides to work on his next plan: blackmail the world with the aid of the brotha ray.

Continued In Street Fighter X.

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BTW,I will always leave the fight scenes to the readers imagination. Oh,and Please Excuse the Cursing,This Series is PG-13 material.Plus No F-Bombs are used,I don't approve of them in My entertainment.
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Postby CAAOutkast » Tue Jun 06, 2006 12:48 pm

Scriped Versions of these will be on the way.
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Postby Saint Kevin » Wed Jun 07, 2006 5:38 am

Um...I hate to be a buzzkill...but there is no way that Capcom will even look at your suggestion. Due to legal issues, they won't even open unsolicited mail or ideas. Back in the old days when companies did open unsolicited ideas, the story looked like this:

1) somebody having an idea similar to one that a company was already working on submits their idea to the company.
2) Company publishes idea and person feels ripped off.
3) Person sues company.
4) Corporate lawyers easily defeat person's lawyer.
5) Big fat waste of time, money, and effort on both sides.

So, because of this, you are not going to get this idea off of the ground unless you personally know somebody at Capcom that can lobby for you.

Sorry man. There's always fan fiction for the fun of it, but don't expect anything beyond that.
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Postby CAAOutkast » Sat Jun 10, 2006 8:39 am

Saint Kevin wrote:Um...I hate to be a buzzkill...but there is no way that Capcom will even look at your suggestion. Due to legal issues, they won't even open unsolicited mail or ideas. Back in the old days when companies did open unsolicited ideas, the story looked like this:

1) somebody having an idea similar to one that a company was already working on submits their idea to the company.
2) Company publishes idea and person feels ripped off.
3) Person sues company.
4) Corporate lawyers easily defeat person's lawyer.
5) Big fat waste of time, money, and effort on both sides.

So, because of this, you are not going to get this idea off of the ground unless you personally know somebody at Capcom that can lobby for you.

Sorry man. There's always fan fiction for the fun of it, but don't expect anything beyond that.



Fan Fiction Isn't good enough. Well than how about this,I sell my Idea to UDON Comics,these guys are freinds of Capcom and they make the Street Fighter Comics. If I fail at that I'll Just Try Again. Until I Succeed. I refuse to give up. I Will Achive My dreams. And NO ONE or NOTHING is gonna stop me. thanks for your opinion anyway.

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Postby CAAOutkast » Mon Jun 19, 2006 7:05 am

No What would Jesus Do? He would not Give up,thats what,he would be persistant and stay the course of his mission.

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Postby Hitokiri » Mon Jun 19, 2006 1:04 pm

Question.

Why do want to get this put into an anime or manga? You could always go the route of a webmanga artist and get your own website. I am serious about my webmanga but would rather not want to get published. I doubt I will because my artwork isn't anywhere near as good as some others but I still purchased a website and showcase my series. I would suggest going that route. Get yourself well known first on the internet. I hate to be blunt but the big-wigs will look at your work, and unless it's something spectacular (which I am not saying it's not; I havn't taken a look at it), proably shelf it. By thrusating yourself out into the internet and gaining support from fans - you can gain more support from possible employers or people wanting to publish you. And it just doesn't have to be regular fan-fction. Do something fun with the site or with what you're writing.

Anyways, I HIGHLY suggest getting yourself on the internet rather then posts on a message board. Without a moderate fan support, while your work may be good, unless it's not mind-blowing enough to knock the big wigs off thier feet, all your work will just be regular fan-fiction.

That's just me 2 cents.
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Postby CAAOutkast » Thu Jun 22, 2006 9:30 am

[quote="Hitokiri"]Question.

Why do want to get this put into an anime or manga? You could always go the route of a webmanga artist and get your own website. I am serious about my webmanga but would rather not want to get published. I doubt I will because my artwork isn't anywhere near as good as some others but I still purchased a website and showcase my series. I would suggest going that route. Get yourself well known first on the internet. I hate to be blunt but the big-wigs will look at your work, and unless it's something spectacular (which I am not saying it's not]

Thanks.Ok,to answer your question. I want Capcom to do a series that wasn't based on Moral Relitivism with Christian Characters. I Do Have my own website,but,I couldn't draw if my life depended on it. I also have some Original Series as well,I hope to get them publised as well. and you're right,I must get out their on the internet. And My Work will be good enough. I don't want my Street Fighter Series to be Fan Fiction. I want it on TV and in the Mainstream Media.

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Postby Hitokiri » Thu Jun 22, 2006 9:50 am

Christisright wrote:Thanks.Ok,to answer your question. I want Capcom to do a series that wasn't based on Moral Relitivism with Christian Characters. I Do Have my own website,but,I couldn't draw if my life depended on it. I also have some Original Series as well,I hope to get them publised as well. and you're right,I must get out their on the internet. And My Work will be good enough. I don't want my Street Fighter Series to be Fan Fiction. I want it on TV and in the Mainstream Media.

thanks for your comments.

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My sugegstion, to see what you want to do, is pursue a career in directing or possibly screen writing. One thing for sure, this is not a "Hey, want to get this turned into a cartoon or published" overnight type deal. If anything, this could take up to 10 years. If you are that dedicated, go for that. Get involved in the industry.

I wouldn't say what you want to do is impossible however it's a very steep hill that you have to climb.
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Postby CAAOutkast » Wed Jun 28, 2006 1:54 pm

Hitokiri wrote:My sugegstion, to see what you want to do, is pursue a career in directing or possibly screen writing. One thing for sure, this is not a "Hey, want to get this turned into a cartoon or published" overnight type deal. If anything, this could take up to 10 years. If you are that dedicated, go for that. Get involved in the industry.

I wouldn't say what you want to do is impossible however it's a very steep hill that you have to climb.


Thanks. BTW,Do you think praying will help?

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Postby CAAOutkast » Sat Aug 05, 2006 12:11 pm

I have an Idea,I'll just get it published without capcom's consent. but acknowlage them in a disclamer. what do you think? I'm gonna make Capcom notice me.
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Postby Radical Dreamer » Sat Aug 05, 2006 3:23 pm

Christisright wrote:I have an Idea,I'll just get it published without capcom's consent. but acknowlage them in a disclamer. what do you think? I'm gonna make Capcom notice me.



This is Street Fighter-based, correct? Getting a series published (which is a big hurdle to jump anyways) without the original company's consent is known in most circles as plagerism, which is a huge deal. Capcom would most likely sue you for taking ideas, especially if you had published your product and were making money off of it (by the way, the publishing company, knowing how wrong plagerism is, wouldn't publish your work in the first place unless you had special permission from Capcom themselves). Yeah, Capcom would notice you, but they certainly wouldn't be on good terms with you, and that's not a way to ask a company to publish something. I'd go another route entirely; Hitokiri's idea was probably the best. :thumb:
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Postby CAAOutkast » Mon Aug 07, 2006 10:03 am

[quote="Radical Dreamer"]This is Street Fighter-based, correct? Getting a series published (which is a big hurdle to jump anyways) without the original company's consent is known in most circles as plagerism, which is a huge deal. Capcom would most likely sue you for taking ideas, especially if you had published your product and were making money off of it (by the way, the publishing company, knowing how wrong plagerism is, wouldn't publish your work in the first place unless you had special permission from Capcom themselves). Yeah, Capcom would notice you, but they certainly wouldn't be on good terms with you, and that's not a way to ask a company to publish something. I'd go another route entirely]


I know It's wrong to plagerise,but I need to get my series idea out before capcom thinks up their own version of my series.
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