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Postby Monkey J. Luffy » Sat Jan 07, 2006 10:38 am

This is the weirdest story ever. Read and laugh or be scarrexd for life. Enjoy :lol:



THE Untochables!

Episode 25567094352

It’s the UNTOUCHABLES! Rubber band man with the power of five rubber bands BORING! Dotted line woman she’s a dotted line and can shoot dotted line parts STUPID! Gasoline man with a gasoline colored body and the power of a lot of gas stations he’s super GET IT AWAY FROM ME! The Radioactive thing he’s radioactive and nobody knows what it is TURN IT OFF! Then there’s that morphing dude who can’t stop cracking off stupid jokes every ten minutes, but we got rid of him in episode 2893844220. Together they protect the city of Metro-Gotham-City-Tropilis from the mysterious Dr.Gloom!

“Oh, no! It’s the U signal!â€
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Postby Felix » Mon Jan 09, 2006 3:19 pm

What you really need is a cool theme song...(...and maybe some pills...)...That was an, um....interesting story. << Nice job?
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Postby Monkey J. Luffy » Tue Jan 10, 2006 1:42 pm

Thanks for replying
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Postby Felix » Tue Jan 10, 2006 5:00 pm

No problem. It did keep me entertained for about 3 minutes ^^
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Postby Tommy » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:32 am

Felix wrote:What you really need is a cool theme song...(...and maybe some pills...)...That was an, um....interesting story. << Nice job?


Imagine being his best friend. XP

That was a story he made for English class. I made one too and it um...was serious.
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Postby Felix » Sun Jan 15, 2006 9:26 pm

XD woah. *salutes you* What kind of grade did he get, do you know? I knwo I once did an essay that was kinda goofy and I got a bad grade because it wasn't serious enough.
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Postby Monkey J. Luffy » Mon Jan 16, 2006 2:03 pm

We never got the grades back. Maybe my mommy knows
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Postby Tommy » Mon Jan 16, 2006 2:18 pm

Well considering he didn`t have any puncuation marks when he passed it in...I`m guessing it wasn`t an A.
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Postby teen4truth » Fri Jan 20, 2006 4:13 pm

That was hilarius(sp?)!!! It was kind of hard to understand because of the whole punctuation thing, but it was very funny^^
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Postby Tommy » Fri Feb 03, 2006 3:12 pm

Dan, I will be surprized if you ever make another post since you despise anime.

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