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Postby true_noir_chloe » Sun Jun 13, 2004 4:35 pm

Uncomfortable, perhaps is the best word to describe how I felt reading your recent installment, Ingemar. :red: I hope the next part resolves the lust between Omega and the ficitonal Chloe... FICTIONAL one. And I do hope I am not further :red: .

:) <-->:shady: can't decide which way I feel at the moment.

Anyways, I still enjoyed reading it and it's very good. Yes, I can hardly wait until you answer the cliffhanger.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby uc pseudonym » Mon Jun 14, 2004 5:26 pm

I can't say that I blame you in the slightest for those feelings, nor should I. At the moment I'd suggest going for the happy emoticon... assuming Ingemar thinks of some other reason for Omega Amen to have the picture, the entire thing between you would be no more than slander.
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Mon Jun 21, 2004 11:10 am

i'd like to be in it...even though Cephas doesn't know me.

*pouts*
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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