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Postby redkorn » Thu Mar 25, 2004 6:03 pm

it was a spanish project.
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Postby ThaKladd » Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:51 am

eeehh... looks good.. but I did not understand the spanish.. ;)
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He played the fool and He opened our eyes
We in our weakness believed we were strong
He became helpless to show we were wrong
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Postby shooraijin » Fri Mar 26, 2004 5:12 am

I'll translate, going top to bottom, left to right, although redkorn seems to have subtitled a few of the frames already.

Stan: I'm bored.
Dan: Go to the city!
Stan: Then what?
Dan: Buy something!
[Signs: store three, store two, store one]
Stan: Let's go to store #2.
Dan: No, [can't read the writing ... yo me puse quiere???] ??I want that store.
Dan: You idiot.
Stan: I want this store!
...
Stan: Goodbye.
Dan: He hit me!
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so do you want a cratique

Postby Chapel » Fri Mar 26, 2004 8:38 am

So you want us to evaluate it and point out your strengths and weaknesses or just tell you what we think?

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Postby Retten » Fri Mar 26, 2004 2:19 pm

shooraijin wrote:I'll translate, going top to bottom, left to right, although redkorn seems to have subtitled a few of the frames already.

Stan: I'm bored.
Dan: Go to the city!
Stan: Then what?
Dan: Buy something!
[Signs: store three, store two, store one]
Stan: Let's go to store #2.
Dan: No, [can't read the writing ... yo me puse quiere???] ??I want that store.
Dan: You idiot.
Stan: I want this store!
...
Stan: Goodbye.
Dan: He hit me!


Wow how many languages do you know shooraijin
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Postby shooraijin » Sat Mar 27, 2004 12:26 am

Enough to be dangerous. ;)
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Postby JediSonic » Sat Mar 27, 2004 7:44 am

lol @ shooby

Wow, thats gotta be the most blood I've ever seen shed over 2 friend disageeing about which store to shop in first!
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Postby redkorn » Sat Mar 27, 2004 5:50 pm

JediSonic wrote:lol @ shooby

Wow, thats gotta be the most blood I've ever seen shed over 2 friend disageeing about which store to shop in first!



you should see the colored version :thumb:
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Postby Kawaii_Angel » Tue Mar 30, 2004 11:17 am

Heheh I like!
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